check yourself
check your pride3 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is an excellent, logical moral, morale boosting, moral and spiritual poem on living, make no pride for self, for anything of yours ever, God and no one ever tolerate self pride anyway, anywhere, anyhow and in any order, style of fashion, self-pride is self inviting disaster, pride brings nothing but destroys everything, so check, check, check and check, avoid and escape from self-pride; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
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This is an excellent, logical moral, morale boosting, moral and spiritual poem on living, make no pride for self, for anything of yours ever, God and no one ever tolerate self pride anyway, anywhere, anyhow and in any order, style of fashion, self-pride is self inviting disaster, pride brings nothing but destroys everything, so check, check, check and check, avoid and escape from self-pride; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 08-Aug-2022
Comment from Frank Malley
Perhaps "check yourself" is intended to be so full of contradictions that, indeed, contradictions become the theme of the poem. Or, mayhap, this poem is a wheel missing spokes the reader must carve and install. Maybe it's my tool, but I'd say this poem's wood cannot be carved into anything other than an enigma.
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Perhaps "check yourself" is intended to be so full of contradictions that, indeed, contradictions become the theme of the poem. Or, mayhap, this poem is a wheel missing spokes the reader must carve and install. Maybe it's my tool, but I'd say this poem's wood cannot be carved into anything other than an enigma.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought you did a wonderful job with this poem. It's in your face and quite frankly a little shocking. But you can't deny the emotion that comes through about/towards this fool. Very well written and creative.
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I thought you did a wonderful job with this poem. It's in your face and quite frankly a little shocking. But you can't deny the emotion that comes through about/towards this fool. Very well written and creative.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
