A Hoop and a Hula
Loop Poetry38 total reviews
Comment from D.C.B. Green
This is a very comical poem. Loop poetry is a newer thing to me, and I have entered the loop poetry contest likewise.
Good luck
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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This is a very comical poem. Loop poetry is a newer thing to me, and I have entered the loop poetry contest likewise.
Good luck
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading. Four stars...did you find something that needs work? If so, let me know, please:)
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Thank you for reading. Four stars...did you find something that needs work? If so, let me know, please:)
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Yes, I apologize that I accidentally did not include it in my review. It was more of a confusing thing, mainly the last stanza. Some of the words or word phrases you used did not make sense. Such as a loop-to-loop.
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Yes, I apologize that I accidentally did not include it in my review. It was more of a confusing thing, mainly the last stanza. Some of the words or word phrases you used did not make sense. Such as a loop-to-loop.
Comment from TDLRasmar
That was very cute. I remember the good ole days and the Hula Hoop. I never quite got the hang of it, as it appears you did get the hang of it . . . eventually. Your pic is cute as well, 4 young chicks with hula hoops every young man's dream.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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That was very cute. I remember the good ole days and the Hula Hoop. I never quite got the hang of it, as it appears you did get the hang of it . . . eventually. Your pic is cute as well, 4 young chicks with hula hoops every young man's dream.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Haha 😂 Thank you for the review and humor!
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Haha 😂 Thank you for the review and humor!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tina,
This is a fun loop poem for the contest that many will relate to, whether
it's the pounds or just the hula hoop craze.
Perfect picture choice and colors in font and background.
It reads well, which not always the case with loops.
I'd doubt I could keep it off the ground these days. :)
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Hello Tina,
This is a fun loop poem for the contest that many will relate to, whether
it's the pounds or just the hula hoop craze.
Perfect picture choice and colors in font and background.
It reads well, which not always the case with loops.
I'd doubt I could keep it off the ground these days. :)
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Robert! The poem was more fun than the hooping almost. Hard but fun!
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Thanks, Robert! The poem was more fun than the hooping almost. Hard but fun!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the review and good luck wishes!
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You're welcome, my friend!
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Thank you for the review and good luck wishes!
Comment from JLR
Tina, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and smiling with you with this loop poem contest entry. Your humor shines through your well-written chosen words with a good selection of unforced end rhymes.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Tina, I thoroughly enjoyed reading and smiling with you with this loop poem contest entry. Your humor shines through your well-written chosen words with a good selection of unforced end rhymes.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you for telling me you smiled! I was getting too serious so I thought I would try to lighten things up!
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Thank you for telling me you smiled! I was getting too serious so I thought I would try to lighten things up!
Comment from godlucifer
when i think of hula-hoop i mostly think of kids and teenagers having fun. i never really thought of an adult using it for a purpose (exercise). i guess you learn something new everyday. your poem was well thought out and well created. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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when i think of hula-hoop i mostly think of kids and teenagers having fun. i never really thought of an adult using it for a purpose (exercise). i guess you learn something new everyday. your poem was well thought out and well created. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review! Yes, Amazon now sells lots of them, some with weight beads that go inside for a better workout!
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Thank you for your review! Yes, Amazon now sells lots of them, some with weight beads that go inside for a better workout!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Obviously, it is a humour and fun poem; you maintain the spirit and order, fun and humour are like courtesy costs nothing but buys everything; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Obviously, it is a humour and fun poem; you maintain the spirit and order, fun and humour are like courtesy costs nothing but buys everything; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you so so much for your review! All for His glory, He who gives the passion to write for Him.
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Thank you so so much for your review! All for His glory, He who gives the passion to write for Him.
Comment from Michaela Moore
What a fun little ditty of a playful poem. All of your diction brings the feelings of Hoola hooping as well as describing it. This was simply delightful! Hoop On!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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What a fun little ditty of a playful poem. All of your diction brings the feelings of Hoola hooping as well as describing it. This was simply delightful! Hoop On!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Michaela! I appreciate your review!
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Thank you, Michaela! I appreciate your review!
Comment from Janet Foor
A clever and fun Loop poem for the contest Tina.
Well written with a touch of humor from your fun artwork to the last line.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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A clever and fun Loop poem for the contest Tina.
Well written with a touch of humor from your fun artwork to the last line.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you! I so appreciate your input!
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Thank you! I so appreciate your input!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a fun write in charming clarity and in complete compliance with the prompt, not easy to do, as we all know, but appearing easily done in this loop poem. Best wishes in the contest with this playful one...
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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In my opinion, a fun write in charming clarity and in complete compliance with the prompt, not easy to do, as we all know, but appearing easily done in this loop poem. Best wishes in the contest with this playful one...
Comment Written 03-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much! I figured I'd have fun working hard ..kind of like hula hooping!
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Thank you so much! I figured I'd have fun working hard ..kind of like hula hooping!
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You are so welcome, Tina, and thank you for sharing...Eve
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It was an enjoyable read, thank you, and you are very welcome, Tina...Eve
