The Tree
The need to connect is universal.29 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
I feel you captured something beautiful here, putting nature to the forefront. This child in your story understood for a moment the value or beauty of a tree. I also enjoy writing about nature.
-Your story highlights the interconnectedness of nature and that the survival of a tree is dependent on the others surrounding it. Your poem reminded me of this.
-Sparkling in your story is : it's central theme and message, and how a simple touch can resonate. Truly lovely story.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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I feel you captured something beautiful here, putting nature to the forefront. This child in your story understood for a moment the value or beauty of a tree. I also enjoy writing about nature.
-Your story highlights the interconnectedness of nature and that the survival of a tree is dependent on the others surrounding it. Your poem reminded me of this.
-Sparkling in your story is : it's central theme and message, and how a simple touch can resonate. Truly lovely story.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your inspired review, Marie. You were able to pick out the theme and express it in a supportive way.
Many thanks to you for your insight, time and review,
Rhonda
Comment from jessizero
This was definitely written from a unique perspective. I haven't felt sorry for a tree since Shel Silverstein's The Giving Tree. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This was definitely written from a unique perspective. I haven't felt sorry for a tree since Shel Silverstein's The Giving Tree. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Aww, thank you, Jessi! What a wonderful compliment! I love all plants, but trees especially.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is absolutely gorgeous! I love the sense of near permanence meaning that, despite not moving, the tree and the kind of person it represents can still become wise.
Mike
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This is absolutely gorgeous! I love the sense of near permanence meaning that, despite not moving, the tree and the kind of person it represents can still become wise.
Mike
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Wow, Fleedle, I love your perspective on this story. You were able to connect with the multiple levels. I do believe, that even the most remote personality type, has a need for contact. Sometimes children can bridge gaps. Of course, I love trees too.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from amahra
That's a great perspective to write from. I love when writers lend animals and inanimate objects a human outlook and voice concerning the world around us. Great artwork you chose also.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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That's a great perspective to write from. I love when writers lend animals and inanimate objects a human outlook and voice concerning the world around us. Great artwork you chose also.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review and comments, Amahra. I often personify objects and animals to try to get points across in a non-threatening way. I think it's the teacher in me.
Have a good week,
Rhonda
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful flash fiction that addresses human and nature relationship. It's very genuine and moving. I didn't know that trees have longing to be touched. I will do it next time when I see a tree which is everywhere in my surrounding.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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What a beautiful flash fiction that addresses human and nature relationship. It's very genuine and moving. I didn't know that trees have longing to be touched. I will do it next time when I see a tree which is everywhere in my surrounding.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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They are definitely organisms that are very old. I'd like to imagine they have feelings.
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Rhonda
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a wonderful story for this contest, good luck. I like the creative way you personified the tree, and you wrote a beautiful ending. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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This is a wonderful story for this contest, good luck. I like the creative way you personified the tree, and you wrote a beautiful ending. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much for you wonderful review! I appreciate your time and effort.
Rhonda
Comment from John Ciarmello
I thought this to be super imaginative and well put together. I like the fact that the tree can think and feel a human's touch and presence. Well done! Loved it
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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I thought this to be super imaginative and well put together. I like the fact that the tree can think and feel a human's touch and presence. Well done! Loved it
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you, John, for your great review. I agree on trees! Gotta love them!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was simply lovely, Rhonda, a touching, emotional flash fiction story narrated by a tree. I do believe trees and plants love to be spoken to, they enjoy being touched. That the little girl filled that need in the tree, was so sweet. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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That was simply lovely, Rhonda, a touching, emotional flash fiction story narrated by a tree. I do believe trees and plants love to be spoken to, they enjoy being touched. That the little girl filled that need in the tree, was so sweet. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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While the story was written as an allegory, I definitely do believe that plants have feelings, and especially feel strongly about trees.
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Ever since I first read Joyce Kilmer's poem on trees, I have had a fascination with trees. Thank you for this enchanting contest entry that gives personification to the tree and its longing for the touch of another being.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Ever since I first read Joyce Kilmer's poem on trees, I have had a fascination with trees. Thank you for this enchanting contest entry that gives personification to the tree and its longing for the touch of another being.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your review, Mary. I am definitely a tree lover, and glad to know you appreciate them as well.
Have a great week,
Rhonda
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork, Rhonda.
-It is nice to see a post from you.
-I appreciate your notes.
-A well written story using the tree to
represent many emotions a person might have.
-You get across the idea of longing very well.
-I like the use of 'rooted' in the beginning.
-A very good ending with the touch of a child,
who represents innocence and acceptance.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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-Lovely artwork, Rhonda.
-It is nice to see a post from you.
-I appreciate your notes.
-A well written story using the tree to
represent many emotions a person might have.
-You get across the idea of longing very well.
-I like the use of 'rooted' in the beginning.
-A very good ending with the touch of a child,
who represents innocence and acceptance.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the lovely six stars, Pam! I really appreciate you additional comments. So very helpful!
I?m glad to be back as well. Sometimes all one needs is a nudge from a friend!
Have a great week,
Rhonda
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and comments, Rhonda. I enjoyed your story, and it had a good premise. I was happy to provide the nudge. Have a great day and week ahead, my friend!
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You are too sweet!!
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Just for special people😊😊