The Sperm Donor, Linda's Story
Part III of IV27 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
OMG, This just gets more and more interesting. It is well written and enjoyable reading with just the right hint of suspense. I am looking forward to the next installment. Evi
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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OMG, This just gets more and more interesting. It is well written and enjoyable reading with just the right hint of suspense. I am looking forward to the next installment. Evi
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thanks again, Terry.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Terry,
It's a nice piece of General Fiction having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting the story of 'Sam as a sperm donor!'
The story is moving ahead in an interesting way. I'm waiting for the next part.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Hello Terry,
It's a nice piece of General Fiction having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting the story of 'Sam as a sperm donor!'
The story is moving ahead in an interesting way. I'm waiting for the next part.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much, the final is posted, Susan's story. Terry.
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Terry, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This twist seems to get a little tighter with every victim, even though rich victims to be, still victims. Now Linda is out of the picture since her and her son have both passed on, so that leaves Susan who Is a lesbian. I can't wait to hear what the consequences are for this super lawyer are when he is found out.""..... thanks for the fun read Terry! Can't wait for the next one. I know it's out but will read it tomorrow, as I have been posting quite a few too lately, so I am behind.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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This twist seems to get a little tighter with every victim, even though rich victims to be, still victims. Now Linda is out of the picture since her and her son have both passed on, so that leaves Susan who Is a lesbian. I can't wait to hear what the consequences are for this super lawyer are when he is found out.""..... thanks for the fun read Terry! Can't wait for the next one. I know it's out but will read it tomorrow, as I have been posting quite a few too lately, so I am behind.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Debi, thank you for the review, I think you will enjoy the final installment. Terry
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Actually I think I am going to read right now as I am lovin it
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Lol
Comment from TDLRasmar
And the wheel turns . . . I didn't read the previous parts, but found this piece to be interesting and an easy read. Now that we have unlocked DNA identification I wonder how many surprises will be found. Nice job on your writing.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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And the wheel turns . . . I didn't read the previous parts, but found this piece to be interesting and an easy read. Now that we have unlocked DNA identification I wonder how many surprises will be found. Nice job on your writing.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the review. I would welcome any input on the other installments if you have time. Thanks, Terry.
Comment from amahra
The Sperm Donor: Linda's Story appears to be a fine ongoing story. I think I may have missed the first part. I didn't know that sperm donors had a right to know where and to whom the sperm was donated. Great job!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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The Sperm Donor: Linda's Story appears to be a fine ongoing story. I think I may have missed the first part. I didn't know that sperm donors had a right to know where and to whom the sperm was donated. Great job!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Amahra, please feel free to back and pick up the first two installments they are in the portfolio, and thank you for reading and reviewing. Terry.
Comment from Sarah Robin
Loved it. Our generation had lots of interesting things going on. I think it is appropriate to discuss same sex relationships and sperm donors. In North Carolina we couldn't dance in the 60s! This piece stirred some memories for me. I enjoyed reading this especially the dialog. It held my attention and made me want to read more.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Loved it. Our generation had lots of interesting things going on. I think it is appropriate to discuss same sex relationships and sperm donors. In North Carolina we couldn't dance in the 60s! This piece stirred some memories for me. I enjoyed reading this especially the dialog. It held my attention and made me want to read more.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Sarah, thank you for reading and reviewing. I am delighted you enjoyed it. Terry.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Yipeee, part III was already written. I like how you give a little of the backstory for anyone that's a new reader. You are a mess. I had just got on a roll reading it, and it ended. Cannot wait for the next installment. GREAT!! Tony Tiger GREAT!!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Yipeee, part III was already written. I like how you give a little of the backstory for anyone that's a new reader. You are a mess. I had just got on a roll reading it, and it ended. Cannot wait for the next installment. GREAT!! Tony Tiger GREAT!!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2022
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Thank you, again. The final installment will be posted in a few hours. I really appreciate that you noticed what I was doing the intro to each new story. In the final part, I do discuss that in the author notes after the last story. Thanks, Terry.
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You are welcome! It's obvious why you ranked so high as a writer.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Now he has a son and a daughter. I can't wait to read what happens next. You did a great job as always. I didn't see a single thing wrong. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Now he has a son and a daughter. I can't wait to read what happens next. You did a great job as always. I didn't see a single thing wrong. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Shirley, thank you very much, final post on Friday. Terry.
Comment from karenina
How interesting! I'm still wondering about the odd coincidence of his three ex-girlfriends all needing to avail themselves of sperm donation! much less the further coincidence that each of them ended up with Sam's sperm and therefore, child!
I have the feeling there will be some revelation as regards the above in the conclusion.
I'm asking myself, is he curious at his advanced age if he has left behind a legacy through his bloodline? Or was there some nefarious reason for him to maintain this connection with his exes?
You've got me thinking, that's for sure. This is a most enjoyable read!
Love how you've incorporated same-sex marriage into this. How will Sam take to that?
I know, I know. I'm waiting!
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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How interesting! I'm still wondering about the odd coincidence of his three ex-girlfriends all needing to avail themselves of sperm donation! much less the further coincidence that each of them ended up with Sam's sperm and therefore, child!
I have the feeling there will be some revelation as regards the above in the conclusion.
I'm asking myself, is he curious at his advanced age if he has left behind a legacy through his bloodline? Or was there some nefarious reason for him to maintain this connection with his exes?
You've got me thinking, that's for sure. This is a most enjoyable read!
Love how you've incorporated same-sex marriage into this. How will Sam take to that?
I know, I know. I'm waiting!
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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LOL, Karenina, thank you for reading, the final installment will be posted on Friday. Terry.
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I'm kind of sorry to see it end...
Comment from Judy Lawless
Being away with my family and not finding much time to review, I apparently missed the first two chapters of this, Terry, but I found this very intriguing. I will have to find time, once I'm caught up, to go back to read the rest. Well written.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Being away with my family and not finding much time to review, I apparently missed the first two chapters of this, Terry, but I found this very intriguing. I will have to find time, once I'm caught up, to go back to read the rest. Well written.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2022
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Judy, thank you for reading. This is my first effort at longer fiction, it is different, but it has been fun. Terry.
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You're welcome, Terry.
