The ABC Buckets
Children's alphabet tale12 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a cute alphabet story for children. As a former early childhood school teacher, I envisioned a book with colorful pictures of things the girls found in nature. I'm not sure young children, promised a prize, would be happy with 'Joy,' instead of a tangible prize. However, the spiritual lesson is imaginative and necessary. The title is compelling and draws readers. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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This is a cute alphabet story for children. As a former early childhood school teacher, I envisioned a book with colorful pictures of things the girls found in nature. I'm not sure young children, promised a prize, would be happy with 'Joy,' instead of a tangible prize. However, the spiritual lesson is imaginative and necessary. The title is compelling and draws readers. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your story, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That really was 'cool' lol. I think all children would like to play that game. It's fun and educational as well. Really well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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That really was 'cool' lol. I think all children would like to play that game. It's fun and educational as well. Really well done and good luck in the contest. Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2022
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was a great story. And it taught the kids to enjoy life in general. With every letter of the alphabet, there is something named after each letter. In the end, they found the letter Z stood for sleep. Thank you for sharing this great awareness piece.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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This was a great story. And it taught the kids to enjoy life in general. With every letter of the alphabet, there is something named after each letter. In the end, they found the letter Z stood for sleep. Thank you for sharing this great awareness piece.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from royowen
Oh yeah, let's have some zeds, how cool, teaching children to be grateful for all the things that God has given is a very good game, it teaches us to be humble, and not develop a sense of entitlement. Well done, good luck, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Oh yeah, let's have some zeds, how cool, teaching children to be grateful for all the things that God has given is a very good game, it teaches us to be humble, and not develop a sense of entitlement. Well done, good luck, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
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Welcome
Comment from Gunner Lil
Great story. An easy read, having a good pace and flow. Would like to take a course on writing children's stories. There are so few new ones. My grand children will enjoy this one.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Great story. An easy read, having a good pace and flow. Would like to take a course on writing children's stories. There are so few new ones. My grand children will enjoy this one.
Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
bucketful's should be bucketfuls.
Seems the girls learned a valuable lesson and had fun doing it.
Isn't that what learning is about?
Then, being thankful for all one is given.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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bucketful's should be bucketfuls.
Seems the girls learned a valuable lesson and had fun doing it.
Isn't that what learning is about?
Then, being thankful for all one is given.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review and tip!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What a great way to help the girls find the "Z." This sounds like a great activity for any school age child just beginning to learn their alphabet. I am sure they would be amazed at all that God has given us.
Very nice story.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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What a great way to help the girls find the "Z." This sounds like a great activity for any school age child just beginning to learn their alphabet. I am sure they would be amazed at all that God has given us.
Very nice story.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is an adorable story. I like the large colorful font. It fits what one expects in kids' writing. The story made a lot of sense, and it was a cool activity any parent could do with children. The ending is really a smart way to get the letter Z into the story. The visual also fits well. Don't forget to make schoolwork a compound word in the first paragraph.
This is a great entry to the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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This is an adorable story. I like the large colorful font. It fits what one expects in kids' writing. The story made a lot of sense, and it was a cool activity any parent could do with children. The ending is really a smart way to get the letter Z into the story. The visual also fits well. Don't forget to make schoolwork a compound word in the first paragraph.
This is a great entry to the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you for the review and tip.
Comment from Regina Elliott
A very charming and God
affirming children's story. I
really enjoyed it. Gratefulness
to God should be learned early in life as the child
characters in your story do.
Many blessings to you & yours. ~
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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A very charming and God
affirming children's story. I
really enjoyed it. Gratefulness
to God should be learned early in life as the child
characters in your story do.
Many blessings to you & yours. ~
Comment Written 25-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much.
