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Comment from dragonpoet
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Nice mix of words and artwork with this sligihtly changed cliche. It shows that we are on this sight to earn these member dollars while enjoying and reviewing the poetry and prose here.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
Joan

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
    Thank you for reading, Joan! Sending good wishes your way.
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Jul-2022
    No problem.
    We can all use them.
    Joan
Comment from DragonSkulls
Exceptional
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I actually laughed out loud at this brilliant piece, from the content to the added cliches in the description and the author notes. Thank you for the chuckle. I wish you the best in the voting. Great write for this particular contest.

DS

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2022

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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A cleverly done rewording of a common cliche. I love your large font and large visual. The title also fits. I think you got the prompt rewrite as intended. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
    Thanks so much, Sandra! I appreciate your kind review.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 16-Jul-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! But wait--did you we get a collective raise?! It seems to take me FOREVER to accumulate a lot of those.

Thanks for the laugh, and very best of luck with the contest! I love your entry.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2022
    Thanks for the fun review, Rachelle! Hehe, and alas, my member dollars are elusive, too! I try and keep my motivation intrinsic, but there is something about being "paid!"

    Thanks for reading and for your fun review!
reply by Rachelle Allen on 16-Jul-2022
    Hahaha. You capitalist, you!!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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Dear Mystery Writer,

Not that I have any sort of capability predicting what happens in the voting booth (unless your name is BoogieNights) but this one just might be a winner. ;)

Very cute and relatable.

Take care,
Erika

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
    Thanks for your fun review, Erika! (And yes--that BoogieNights! :)
Comment from WLHall
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I wasn't sure what form this would take and a little vague on the concept, but yours made the most sense to me. It's so funny and creative incorporating fanstory dollars for another day, another dollar. Great job

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2022
    Thank you! I appreciate your kind review. Sending good wishes your way!
Comment from Raul1
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This cliche meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2022