My Colors? Red and Blue on White
Nice prompt for this week. Thanks!3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Finally, someone who isn't afraid to respect old glory! Should have thrown number three in there some place (white). We need more patriotism, NOW!
Good job
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Finally, someone who isn't afraid to respect old glory! Should have thrown number three in there some place (white). We need more patriotism, NOW!
Good job
Comment Written 10-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2022
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Well, the rules called for two, so I put two on white. Thanks for your great response. PO2 here, Nam era, proud of my service, not so happy with current leadership.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love that you've infused this with a sense of fun. So much patriotic verse is very serious and po-faced, but you've elected for a bouncy rhythm, and plenty of humour. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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I love that you've infused this with a sense of fun. So much patriotic verse is very serious and po-faced, but you've elected for a bouncy rhythm, and plenty of humour. I very much enjoyed the read.
Mike
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Thanks for a great review to start my day. Indeed, there is enough anger, frustration and hostility in the world and I try to find the humor in our condition. If I made you smile, than I feel good.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2022
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I admit to being a frustrated comic. I like to make people smile at least. Almost all my writings are like that, poetry or prose. Thanks for stopping by and reading mine.
