Today, Tomorrow and Yesterday
Whoosh.18 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Great line - congratulations on placing in this contest. I like the way you indented TODAY to give it the look of forward movement. Plus your statement is clearly true. Nice job:-)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Great line - congratulations on placing in this contest. I like the way you indented TODAY to give it the look of forward movement. Plus your statement is clearly true. Nice job:-)
Comment Written 18-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2022
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Good morning, and best wishes. Appreciate your visit.
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Good morning, and best wishes. Appreciate your visit.
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Good morning, and best wishes. Appreciate your visit.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Nice one line poem laying out the inexorable flow of time in a unique twist of wording. I liked the note on the song by Bobby McFerrin. A rather philosophical piece.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Nice one line poem laying out the inexorable flow of time in a unique twist of wording. I liked the note on the song by Bobby McFerrin. A rather philosophical piece.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Paul McFarland
I must be getting old. I had to read your poem three times before I could wrap my brain around it. I think tomorrow becomes yesterday in two days, so today will be long gone.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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I must be getting old. I had to read your poem three times before I could wrap my brain around it. I think tomorrow becomes yesterday in two days, so today will be long gone.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2022
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R u trying to confuse me? Thanks for reading it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written One Line Poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that are so true. Very good imagery from the picture you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a very well written One Line Poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words that are so true. Very good imagery from the picture you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I appreciate the review and kind words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your one liner is well presented, Tom. I enjoyed reading
it. We all need to live in the moment as time waits on no
one. The reference to the song was great. I remember that
one. I liked the image.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Your one liner is well presented, Tom. I enjoyed reading
it. We all need to live in the moment as time waits on no
one. The reference to the song was great. I remember that
one. I liked the image.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
This is so true. It's a great thought, and you expressed it well. Your formatting really helped emphasize the important bits. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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This is so true. It's a great thought, and you expressed it well. Your formatting really helped emphasize the important bits. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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amen
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amen
Comment from livelylinda
Tom: awesome picture. Few weighty words which kept me thinking and thinking, etc. Simple yet heavy weight of reality. Your work is unique and worthy of contemplation. Linda
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Tom: awesome picture. Few weighty words which kept me thinking and thinking, etc. Simple yet heavy weight of reality. Your work is unique and worthy of contemplation. Linda
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Now if I can only have it read by enough browsers... might it have a chance to win? Thank you.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I liked this haiku for its succinct, yet excellent wording. I've tried several times to write a six-line poem, but everything came out sounding "trite." You captured the essence of the objective well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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I liked this haiku for its succinct, yet excellent wording. I've tried several times to write a six-line poem, but everything came out sounding "trite." You captured the essence of the objective well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice photo and presentation, Tom.
-Thanks for sharing the song lyrics.
-You wrote a good one line poem with a good topic.
-I like the formatting highlighting each time period.
-The message is a good one, creatively expressed.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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-Nice photo and presentation, Tom.
-Thanks for sharing the song lyrics.
-You wrote a good one line poem with a good topic.
-I like the formatting highlighting each time period.
-The message is a good one, creatively expressed.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Appreciate your kind words. what's (respa) R.I.P.???
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You are welcome. It was my old FS name and consisted of a group of initials. I kept it for reference. I just go by Pam, my real name.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I like your one-line poem, and I like your note. The visual goes well with the line of poetry. I like that the key words are in italics. However, I do feel the font needs to be a larger size. The visual overpowers the line. If you made the background black and the font white it would coordinate well with the black and white image at the bottom of the photo, and it would make the text more focal.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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I like your one-line poem, and I like your note. The visual goes well with the line of poetry. I like that the key words are in italics. However, I do feel the font needs to be a larger size. The visual overpowers the line. If you made the background black and the font white it would coordinate well with the black and white image at the bottom of the photo, and it would make the text more focal.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2022
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Let me see if I can make the suggested changes. Thanks.
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You are welcome.
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I found how to make the background black but ???? how does one change the letter coloring?
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Highlight your poem and in Advanced editor find an underlined capital A at the top of the bar and click on it to change the color of the font.
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Nope. Black border remains but the white selected on A underlined is a dingy gray and hard to see, Returning to the original setting. Thanks for trying. I can see where it would help.
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If you select more colors, you can get a solid white.
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I did, and must have done that wrong too.
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I even tried bright orange and the lettering on black remained dull gray.
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I am not that computer savvy and could only help more if I lived nearby. I guess it is meant to stay the same. Sorry, I wasn't helpful.
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You tried. I tried. At least I increased the size of the font.
