Life a new
life a new15 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
It is interesting and unique to read. Well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
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It is interesting and unique to read. Well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. I like your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I like your 6-word poem. It is written in clear and large font, so it is easy to read. I always like short poems centered, but in this case, they are large and prominent enough. However, I don't get the connection between your poem and the visual. I would think a butterfly image would fit better. Good luck in the contest.
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I like your 6-word poem. It is written in clear and large font, so it is easy to read. I always like short poems centered, but in this case, they are large and prominent enough. However, I don't get the connection between your poem and the visual. I would think a butterfly image would fit better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2022
Comment from E. Denison
Very nice entry here for the 6 word contest, Iza. I like the hopefulness of this poem, which you have specifically returned to in each line. The notion that there are second chances was a smart one to put at the end of this brief work because it really opens it up for a world of possibilities for the reader even after the poem ends. I like your image, and would like to know more about it. Appears similar to some natural structures we have in the American southwest (perhaps it is!) but it also reminds me of the RakotzbrĂ¼cke in Germany and similar structures across Europe. The mirroring of the "bridge" with the water beneath creates a perfect circle, which is often connected with the notion of a portal to another world or time. Is your image connected with a similar notion or perhaps second chances in some way? Thank you for sharing this hopeful entry. Best of luck in the contest!
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Very nice entry here for the 6 word contest, Iza. I like the hopefulness of this poem, which you have specifically returned to in each line. The notion that there are second chances was a smart one to put at the end of this brief work because it really opens it up for a world of possibilities for the reader even after the poem ends. I like your image, and would like to know more about it. Appears similar to some natural structures we have in the American southwest (perhaps it is!) but it also reminds me of the RakotzbrĂ¼cke in Germany and similar structures across Europe. The mirroring of the "bridge" with the water beneath creates a perfect circle, which is often connected with the notion of a portal to another world or time. Is your image connected with a similar notion or perhaps second chances in some way? Thank you for sharing this hopeful entry. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
How very brutal and miserable life would be without hope, without the belief in second chances. You have made very effective use of your six words, conveying a powerful message.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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How very brutal and miserable life would be without hope, without the belief in second chances. You have made very effective use of your six words, conveying a powerful message.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You said a lot using only six words. I'm impressed. I need about 80,000 to say anything. LOL Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You said a lot using only six words. I'm impressed. I need about 80,000 to say anything. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Barbara, your review it warms my heart:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Iza.
I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you formatted
the lines and the great word choices. The image is
supportive, too. I liked the positiveness of your
entry.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Iza.
I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you formatted
the lines and the great word choices. The image is
supportive, too. I liked the positiveness of your
entry.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Jan for this heart warming review:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Iza.
-You did a good job with your six words.
-I like how you used two in each line so
they read like a haiku or senyru.
-Very good adjectives and use of personification.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Iza.
-You did a good job with your six words.
-I like how you used two in each line so
they read like a haiku or senyru.
-Very good adjectives and use of personification.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much Pam, I really appreciate your review especially since you are the queen of poetry writings.
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You are very welcome, Iza, and I am honored by your complement.
I really appreciate it.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice six word poem. It is an optimistic poem that shows the up and downs life may have, but there is always hope for something better and making a change is good thing. If things don't go well and you're not happy with the way things are, thank God for second chances.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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This is a nice six word poem. It is an optimistic poem that shows the up and downs life may have, but there is always hope for something better and making a change is good thing. If things don't go well and you're not happy with the way things are, thank God for second chances.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you Miss Beth:)
Comment from royowen
I like the idea of second chances, it gives me an idea of how Jesus doesn't want to be lost because we've made mistakes and think there is no way back from the brink! Beautifully written Iza, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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I like the idea of second chances, it gives me an idea of how Jesus doesn't want to be lost because we've made mistakes and think there is no way back from the brink! Beautifully written Iza, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Good Morning Mr. Roy, I believe in second chances, and I hope I get a chance to try my second soon:)
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I thought about hope and what would I do without it? The
last line of this poem give me a second chance! Great thought provoking
words. The artwork is lovely and compliments this poem.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! I thought about hope and what would I do without it? The
last line of this poem give me a second chance! Great thought provoking
words. The artwork is lovely and compliments this poem.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review:)
