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A friend's genuine share makes a father step in2 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Sammy105 a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your story it was well written and kept me engaged. As a single father to a daughter I could relate to the story and I hope I'm as loving and reasonable as the father was in this story. Good job.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Hello Sammy105 a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I really enjoyed your story it was well written and kept me engaged. As a single father to a daughter I could relate to the story and I hope I'm as loving and reasonable as the father was in this story. Good job.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2022
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Thanks... This is something I wish would happen... I lost a very dear friend of mine, she does not want to speak to me anymore... I wrote this trying to feel better about it.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have a few rough spots to work on here, but the story keeps the reader interested. The ending could use a little more drama. Best of luck in your literary pursuits.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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You have a few rough spots to work on here, but the story keeps the reader interested. The ending could use a little more drama. Best of luck in your literary pursuits.
Comment Written 20-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks! Well it's not completely fiction... My best friend in this whole world practically stopped speaking to me... And I can't figure out the reason, so I just assumed her husband does not trust her with me, and I came up with this to make myself feel better....
