Morning on the Lake
Summer has its own aroma.21 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello C2 a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5 Line Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Hello C2 a good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5 Line Poem contest entry, you executed it well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captured the atmospherics here by introducing the aroma into your few words here and bringing the scene live, much enjoyed, l good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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You captured the atmospherics here by introducing the aroma into your few words here and bringing the scene live, much enjoyed, l good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading this 5 line poem. This is a good contest entry and should do well.
I think you've painted a clear picture of what the feeling is when you wake on a summers morning. There truly is an aroma to summer, my second favorite time of year. Fall is my first. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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I enjoyed reading this 5 line poem. This is a good contest entry and should do well.
I think you've painted a clear picture of what the feeling is when you wake on a summers morning. There truly is an aroma to summer, my second favorite time of year. Fall is my first. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely five-line poem vividly describes how the elements of an awe-inspiring scene in nature can come together and deeply affect those gazing upon it.
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Your lovely five-line poem vividly describes how the elements of an awe-inspiring scene in nature can come together and deeply affect those gazing upon it.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
One can almost get that wonderful aroma at this remove - that beautiful aroma of early Summer as it unfolds -'heavy with fragrant oak moss'- thanks for reminding us
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One can almost get that wonderful aroma at this remove - that beautiful aroma of early Summer as it unfolds -'heavy with fragrant oak moss'- thanks for reminding us
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, C2. Your syllable count
is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your words
create great imagery. I could see this beautiful place,
though I'm far from any lake. I like the formatting of
your lines.
Best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Your contest entry read well, C2. Your syllable count
is correct per line, the image is perfect, and your words
create great imagery. I could see this beautiful place,
though I'm far from any lake. I like the formatting of
your lines.
Best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I like the picture and can almost smell the oak moss. The picture is captivating. There is so much to enjoy in the picture. I see a house in the woods surrounded by trees of nature shade. The trees act like sunglasses. You get a glare, however, not to blinding. Thank you for posting and sharing this wonderful place.
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I like the picture and can almost smell the oak moss. The picture is captivating. There is so much to enjoy in the picture. I see a house in the woods surrounded by trees of nature shade. The trees act like sunglasses. You get a glare, however, not to blinding. Thank you for posting and sharing this wonderful place.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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You are welcome.
Comment from Whitewave
C2,
A beautiful picture brought to life with your five lines of fragrant words.
I like it and can taste the aroma of summer on the lake. I agree that it all looks and feels intoxicating. Thank you for this post.
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C2,
A beautiful picture brought to life with your five lines of fragrant words.
I like it and can taste the aroma of summer on the lake. I agree that it all looks and feels intoxicating. Thank you for this post.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post as an entry in this five line contest, yes indeed, the olfactory sense is one of the most pleasurable, sparking the memory most profoundly as well as a great sensory enjoyment too. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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This is an excellent post as an entry in this five line contest, yes indeed, the olfactory sense is one of the most pleasurable, sparking the memory most profoundly as well as a great sensory enjoyment too. Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Very well done for fitting this into the specific syllable count for this contest. I enjoyed reading your poem, and I like that you chose one word for the last line.
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Very well done for fitting this into the specific syllable count for this contest. I enjoyed reading your poem, and I like that you chose one word for the last line.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
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Thank you!
