One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku.
I love the whole presentation, it is as pretty as butterfly on a rose!
Lovely description of the butterfly and the satori line is perfect - romantic, even :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your haiku.
I love the whole presentation, it is as pretty as butterfly on a rose!
Lovely description of the butterfly and the satori line is perfect - romantic, even :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Beri Bee
Sweet encounter! Honey rose! This haiku surprises so nicely. For me, I always think of butterflies as fragile. I think it was a music teacher who told me they represent love with a tragic end (think Madame Butterfly). So, my mind immediately went to that vein. But then, the honey rose and sweet encounter. Made me ponder... sweet encounters are fragile, probably honey roses too. Love it! Thanks!
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Sweet encounter! Honey rose! This haiku surprises so nicely. For me, I always think of butterflies as fragile. I think it was a music teacher who told me they represent love with a tragic end (think Madame Butterfly). So, my mind immediately went to that vein. But then, the honey rose and sweet encounter. Made me ponder... sweet encounters are fragile, probably honey roses too. Love it! Thanks!
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome!
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- simple - poem- beautiful presentation- good flow- tying together sweet encounter and honey rose gave it a nice touch - good information about butterfly- good job---
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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I like your poem- simple - poem- beautiful presentation- good flow- tying together sweet encounter and honey rose gave it a nice touch - good information about butterfly- good job---
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
First, I want THAT shade of orange! It would be lovely on my bedroom wall! (Okay that's out of the way...)
I often marvel that for such a delicate creature, the butterfly seems to capture our attention and imagination ~ so frequently thought of as a sign from a loved one who has passed that they are watching over us.
Nobody does this form as beautifully as you...
Karenina
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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First, I want THAT shade of orange! It would be lovely on my bedroom wall! (Okay that's out of the way...)
I often marvel that for such a delicate creature, the butterfly seems to capture our attention and imagination ~ so frequently thought of as a sign from a loved one who has passed that they are watching over us.
Nobody does this form as beautifully as you...
Karenina
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you very much, karenina. I love your detailed and kind reviews. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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You too!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The color is beautiful. I love orange. It looks like sherbet. And the butterfly is lovely. It is amazing how this picture relaxes. That fragile butterfly flapping its thin wings. This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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The color is beautiful. I love orange. It looks like sherbet. And the butterfly is lovely. It is amazing how this picture relaxes. That fragile butterfly flapping its thin wings. This is a great poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I love your detailed and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your use of alliteration and consonance (fragile butterfly flutters) and the connection of the "sweet encounter" of the last line to the "honey rose." Lovely picture!
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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I like your use of alliteration and consonance (fragile butterfly flutters) and the connection of the "sweet encounter" of the last line to the "honey rose." Lovely picture!
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. I love your detailed and kind reviews. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I loved everything about this haiku, Gypsy.
The picture is beautiful, but your words
are equally beautiful. The font colors
worked well, too. Your words paint an
awesome picture of the fragile butterfly.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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I loved everything about this haiku, Gypsy.
The picture is beautiful, but your words
are equally beautiful. The font colors
worked well, too. Your words paint an
awesome picture of the fragile butterfly.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I love your detailed and kind reviews. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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