Sea Of Galilee
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Comment from Ulla
Thank you for sharing this with us, Brett. I learned about the Sumers in school so I found it fascinating to suddenly be confronted with them again. Thank you for sharing you highly interesting work. I'm learning all the time. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this with us, Brett. I learned about the Sumers in school so I found it fascinating to suddenly be confronted with them again. Thank you for sharing you highly interesting work. I'm learning all the time. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Appreciate your review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing all your hard work and time spent searching to compile all the information as we follow along your path over the many years. It's always a pleasure.
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Thanks for sharing all your hard work and time spent searching to compile all the information as we follow along your path over the many years. It's always a pleasure.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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As always, so appreciate your kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is an informative read. Most of this information I've never heard before. You did a great job as always. I look forward to reading your work. Have a great evening. Shirley
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This is an informative read. Most of this information I've never heard before. You did a great job as always. I look forward to reading your work. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
What an incredible collection of historical events you're gathering, I remember some German friends saying when we took a trip to Turkey after staying with friends in Dubai, why do you want to go there, I didn't reply, but felt like saying, "When you lot were swinging around in trees, this was were civilisation was founded." Beautifully written Brett,
Blessings Roy
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What an incredible collection of historical events you're gathering, I remember some German friends saying when we took a trip to Turkey after staying with friends in Dubai, why do you want to go there, I didn't reply, but felt like saying, "When you lot were swinging around in trees, this was were civilisation was founded." Beautifully written Brett,
Blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Appreciate your thoughtful review.
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Most welcome
Comment from R. Marc Goodson
This is a good historic writing. It can be improved by eliminating listings and writing these things in paragraph form. E.g., You wrote:
"***ruling much of the Near East and Nubia
***agriculture and mining of various minerals
***an independent writing system
***assorted trades with other countries
***a strong military
***building pyramids..."
This might be better stated this way: 'Ancient Egypt is known for early engineering, such as the building of the pyramids. It also had a strong military and ruled much of the Near East and Nubia.' Making sentences out of what remains of the list on Egypt will improve the writing. Also, same comment regarding other lists in the work.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This is a good historic writing. It can be improved by eliminating listings and writing these things in paragraph form. E.g., You wrote:
"***ruling much of the Near East and Nubia
***agriculture and mining of various minerals
***an independent writing system
***assorted trades with other countries
***a strong military
***building pyramids..."
This might be better stated this way: 'Ancient Egypt is known for early engineering, such as the building of the pyramids. It also had a strong military and ruled much of the Near East and Nubia.' Making sentences out of what remains of the list on Egypt will improve the writing. Also, same comment regarding other lists in the work.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Review received.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This was extremely informative. I really enjoyed reading. I have always wondered why civilizations didn't develop at the same rate. I would think logically they would, but they didn't.
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This was extremely informative. I really enjoyed reading. I have always wondered why civilizations didn't develop at the same rate. I would think logically they would, but they didn't.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this posting. Much appreciate the review.
