Kimberly
a 5-7-718 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I'm pleased for you that this sweet poem was mentioned in the site contest results. Young Kimberly is growing up fast to join the dance of life, with ballet lessons. Clever idea to use her clothing as wordplay motifs.
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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I'm pleased for you that this sweet poem was mentioned in the site contest results. Young Kimberly is growing up fast to join the dance of life, with ballet lessons. Clever idea to use her clothing as wordplay motifs.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 17-May-2022
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Thank you, Lisa, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Spitfire
Clever you. Making use of a ballet term and an infant outfit to describe a growing child. Great alliteration with Kimberly and quickly. The dance, of course, is what life is.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Clever you. Making use of a ballet term and an infant outfit to describe a growing child. Great alliteration with Kimberly and quickly. The dance, of course, is what life is.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks, Shari
Comment from sunnilicious
Children are a blessing from God. This was a wonderful poem to capture growing up or youths' milestone. You met the syllable count. Very niched like a short ode. Great work.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Children are a blessing from God. This was a wonderful poem to capture growing up or youths' milestone. You met the syllable count. Very niched like a short ode. Great work.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, Sunnilicious
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I like the play on words of ones and twos - very clever.
How quickly the little ones grow from baby to young girl, but what comes through mostly in these few words is love and pride for sweet Kimberly.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I like the play on words of ones and twos - very clever.
How quickly the little ones grow from baby to young girl, but what comes through mostly in these few words is love and pride for sweet Kimberly.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thanks, Mary
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Bill.
-I am enjoying the various topics you are writing about.
-The syllable count is good, along with the description of Kimberly.
-I like the idea of joining the dance, especially since she has just joined the real world, too.
-It can also refer to getting older since she has progressed to tutus.
-Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Bill.
-I am enjoying the various topics you are writing about.
-The syllable count is good, along with the description of Kimberly.
-I like the idea of joining the dance, especially since she has just joined the real world, too.
-It can also refer to getting older since she has progressed to tutus.
-Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love that you mention her attire here as she grows from a baby to a young girl and she will soon be in ball gowns, much enjoyed Bill, a sweet gentle write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I love that you mention her attire here as she grows from a baby to a young girl and she will soon be in ball gowns, much enjoyed Bill, a sweet gentle write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Cass Carlton
Is that Kimberley in the artwork? It might well be, 'cos she's growing up really fast. I love the quip about onesies and tutus in your piece ,Bill. It sums up the transition from babyhood to little girlhood so delicately. I expect your Kimberley is quite the little girl now, with dolls and teddy bears, and tea sets and picture books and best dresses on Sunday. I only had boys, so my experience with girls was with my sister's daughters. Oh I had fun alright, but
girls are special aren't they? cheers Cass
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Is that Kimberley in the artwork? It might well be, 'cos she's growing up really fast. I love the quip about onesies and tutus in your piece ,Bill. It sums up the transition from babyhood to little girlhood so delicately. I expect your Kimberley is quite the little girl now, with dolls and teddy bears, and tea sets and picture books and best dresses on Sunday. I only had boys, so my experience with girls was with my sister's daughters. Oh I had fun alright, but
girls are special aren't they? cheers Cass
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Cass. Yes, she is the youngest of our five grandkids and is as precocious and adorable as can be.
Comment from lyenochka
That a cute way to show how quickly our little ones "join in the dance" of life from "onesies to tutus."
I think this will do well in the contest but you should address it to Kimberly in the second line.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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That a cute way to show how quickly our little ones "join in the dance" of life from "onesies to tutus."
I think this will do well in the contest but you should address it to Kimberly in the second line.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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You are right, so I did. Thank you.
Comment from juliaSjames
Clever play on words here, Bill. Focused on the usual interpretation I didn't get it right away. Or I may be in a NaPoWriMo daze!!! LOL
Children grow up like weeds. I was there to greet both my granddaughters when they were born. And now they're into basketball soccer and SOLs. Cherish every precious move of your dancing queen.
Oh and good luck in the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Clever play on words here, Bill. Focused on the usual interpretation I didn't get it right away. Or I may be in a NaPoWriMo daze!!! LOL
Children grow up like weeds. I was there to greet both my granddaughters when they were born. And now they're into basketball soccer and SOLs. Cherish every precious move of your dancing queen.
Oh and good luck in the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Julia
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent 5-7-7 poem. I can see Kimberly growing up way too quickly, but she must feel very proud of her progress I imagine. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent 5-7-7 poem. I can see Kimberly growing up way too quickly, but she must feel very proud of her progress I imagine. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Kate.
