One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem- introduction to a new type- good picture presentation- informative- connecting with metaphors well - took time to research topic- and the associated feeling the subject- farmers - must have experienced- good job.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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I like this poem- introduction to a new type- good picture presentation- informative- connecting with metaphors well - took time to research topic- and the associated feeling the subject- farmers - must have experienced- good job.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, AP. I appreciate the exceptional review and six stars.
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Comment from aryr
A beautiful picture, Gypsy. I appreciate your narrative notes about crows, it is interesting that it is called a 'murder'. I enjoyed your words because they showed that after all the farmer's sweat and I am imagining that his spouse and children, all took part in. Then the crows descended. Blessed be n hugs.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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A beautiful picture, Gypsy. I appreciate your narrative notes about crows, it is interesting that it is called a 'murder'. I enjoyed your words because they showed that after all the farmer's sweat and I am imagining that his spouse and children, all took part in. Then the crows descended. Blessed be n hugs.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Aryr. I appreciate all your reviews and the time you take. Blessed be!
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Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This poem feels emotional and moody. As a Native American, we believe that crows symbolize change. If they fly overhead, change is coming your way. Beautiful presentation
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This poem feels emotional and moody. As a Native American, we believe that crows symbolize change. If they fly overhead, change is coming your way. Beautiful presentation
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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KL, thank you very much for your excellent review and for sharing your nationality. I am from Spain. I love the Native American culture. It's interesting that the crow is seen as a symbol of change. In Europe and the USA crows are associated with darkness ... death or a message from beyond. I just find them fascinating creatures.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
Your dark poem is beautifully executed.
Some people on earth say one is either hunted or a hunter, though I hope it is not this way.
The crows in your story reap what others have sown with hard work and sweat.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
AFA,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Gypsy,
Your dark poem is beautifully executed.
Some people on earth say one is either hunted or a hunter, though I hope it is not this way.
The crows in your story reap what others have sown with hard work and sweat.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Best wishes,
AFA,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Cindy. Have a wonderful day :)
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Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem Gypsy, the narrative is great, and the theme is good too, it's amazing how crows seem to exist all over the world, we have magpies, which are incredibly intelligent also. Beautifully written Gypsy blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent poem Gypsy, the narrative is great, and the theme is good too, it's amazing how crows seem to exist all over the world, we have magpies, which are incredibly intelligent also. Beautifully written Gypsy blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Roy. Have a wonderful day :)
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You too
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This excellent poem describes one of the man-to-animal relationships--with the watchful creature waiting to chow down on the crops the hard-working farmer has worn himself out to produce.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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This excellent poem describes one of the man-to-animal relationships--with the watchful creature waiting to chow down on the crops the hard-working farmer has worn himself out to produce.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Janice. Have a wonderful day :)
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Comment from Gloria ....
Crows cawing overhead always creates such strong emotion and imagery.
I have not head of this form before, but you have used it with great skill.
Many thanks for sharing today. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Crows cawing overhead always creates such strong emotion and imagery.
I have not head of this form before, but you have used it with great skill.
Many thanks for sharing today. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Gloria. Have a wonderful day :)
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Comment from kahpot
You have made the reader feel sorry for the farmer in this wonderful read-and example of this form, "sour sweat and worries" very well written and presented, I like this picture for this challenge****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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You have made the reader feel sorry for the farmer in this wonderful read-and example of this form, "sour sweat and worries" very well written and presented, I like this picture for this challenge****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review, Kym. Have a wonderful day :)
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Comment from moongirlwriter
Crows are very interesting birds and can grow to be the size of many cats. I didn't know they can talk like parrots. But they must be pretty smart because the are the one species that has lived longer on the planet than any other. Best of luck with this piece.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Crows are very interesting birds and can grow to be the size of many cats. I didn't know they can talk like parrots. But they must be pretty smart because the are the one species that has lived longer on the planet than any other. Best of luck with this piece.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your review. Have a wonderful day :)
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy--and you're absolutely correct; they are extremily smart; they're also extremily noisy--I for one don't mind them, Vultures of The wires!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy--and you're absolutely correct; they are extremily smart; they're also extremily noisy--I for one don't mind them, Vultures of The wires!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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I have a lot of crows around my house. We have a sky light window and once a crow kept knocking on it. It was really weird and scary.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy hugs :)
