The Writings of a Mouse
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lillian"Pieces of my Heart
24 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Make Us Smile contest.
Who doesn't love a dog? Not too many. It's a heartfelt story poem.
You followed the rules well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Excellent entry for the Make Us Smile contest.
Who doesn't love a dog? Not too many. It's a heartfelt story poem.
You followed the rules well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy! Your words mean a lot.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done love poem to your dog. at first I thought it was for your husband but then I realized at the end it was for your dog. like the last line the best.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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nicely done love poem to your dog. at first I thought it was for your husband but then I realized at the end it was for your dog. like the last line the best.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much! No husband. Just my furry girl. :))
Comment from Wendy G
I can totally identify with you in your writing here. My seven year old is likewise asleep at my feet as I write, and life would never be the same without him. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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I can totally identify with you in your writing here. My seven year old is likewise asleep at my feet as I write, and life would never be the same without him. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Wendy! Lillian is asleep at my side snoring as read this. :))
Comment from jenintorre
A very cute little poem. You sure had me fooled until the end. I love your chosen artwork and presentation. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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A very cute little poem. You sure had me fooled until the end. I love your chosen artwork and presentation. Good luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thank so very much Jen!
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was really cute and heartwarming. Love dogs. It is a shame they don't live longer, but it makes the time spent with them that much more precious.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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This was really cute and heartwarming. Love dogs. It is a shame they don't live longer, but it makes the time spent with them that much more precious.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Awe. Thanks so very much. She?s my girl that?s for sure.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are descriptive, strong, clear, filled with love and
creative. I pondered on these words. Thank you for the author's notes
they complimented the words in this poem. The artwork is bright and colorful! It adds to the beauty of this poem.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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The author's words are descriptive, strong, clear, filled with love and
creative. I pondered on these words. Thank you for the author's notes
they complimented the words in this poem. The artwork is bright and colorful! It adds to the beauty of this poem.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thank you for the review and the feedback! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Ramona,
I love this poem that celebrates the wonders of dog companionship.
Our friendship with dogs is always too short, so we should cherish each moment, like you write in your poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck and best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Ramona,
I love this poem that celebrates the wonders of dog companionship.
Our friendship with dogs is always too short, so we should cherish each moment, like you write in your poem.
Excellent work.
Good luck and best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much Cindy! I am honored by your review.
Comment from Destinee Wallace1
I enjoyed this poem and found it to be exceptionally sweet. That seems to be a big dog. I didn't see any grammar issues. I liked the simplicity. Keep writing and striving.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed this poem and found it to be exceptionally sweet. That seems to be a big dog. I didn't see any grammar issues. I liked the simplicity. Keep writing and striving.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much for your excellent review and your feedback!
Comment from Leann DS
You have expressed the same feelings that I have for my pets. They are my children, not unlike my actual children, but they were much easier to potty train. :-) When you really get to know an animal, it's not hard to discover their distinct personalities, and the best thing is their unconditional love. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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You have expressed the same feelings that I have for my pets. They are my children, not unlike my actual children, but they were much easier to potty train. :-) When you really get to know an animal, it's not hard to discover their distinct personalities, and the best thing is their unconditional love. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much for you review and for sharing your own experiences.
Comment from Janetsue
Many years ago I had a golden retriever. It also fit your wonderful description of your Lillian very well. Pets are special loving additions to our lives. You have written a beautiful tribute and I enjoyed reading it very much.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Many years ago I had a golden retriever. It also fit your wonderful description of your Lillian very well. Pets are special loving additions to our lives. You have written a beautiful tribute and I enjoyed reading it very much.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much!
