A Night We Shant Forget
Go to where no man has gone10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This romance story, A Night We Shant Forget, is a funny tale of two folks who initially seemed like mismatches, but found love. Well told.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This romance story, A Night We Shant Forget, is a funny tale of two folks who initially seemed like mismatches, but found love. Well told.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Romance Story writing prompt contest.
Interesting love story of how opposites attract. He being so tall and she so short. The shared beer helped get rid of the inhibitions and all turned out fine.
Well done
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Excellent entry for the Romance Story writing prompt contest.
Interesting love story of how opposites attract. He being so tall and she so short. The shared beer helped get rid of the inhibitions and all turned out fine.
Well done
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a story; they do say that opposites attract one another. Good thing she did not get mad at you when you fell over her. She must have a lot of faith that she would be alright.
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what a story; they do say that opposites attract one another. Good thing she did not get mad at you when you fell over her. She must have a lot of faith that she would be alright.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
Comment from pome lover
Well you look like a mighty handsome couple, Mr. Horonzy.
I have to admit, stumbling over and knocking out your wife-to-be is a truly original first meeting. She must have been an understanding soul though, as you picked her up very gallantly and resuscitated her.
This is a most original romance story which worked, with nary a mention of romance. :)
A love story, non-the-less. well done.
Katharine
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Well you look like a mighty handsome couple, Mr. Horonzy.
I have to admit, stumbling over and knocking out your wife-to-be is a truly original first meeting. She must have been an understanding soul though, as you picked her up very gallantly and resuscitated her.
This is a most original romance story which worked, with nary a mention of romance. :)
A love story, non-the-less. well done.
Katharine
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
Comment from Begin Again
Opposites do attract and I believe there a lot of us who will attest to it with stories much like yours. You told your love story with humor and didn't get overly sappy. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
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Opposites do attract and I believe there a lot of us who will attest to it with stories much like yours. You told your love story with humor and didn't get overly sappy. Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Hi Tom, I enjoyed your story a lot, and found your introduction about how you were opposites in every way expressed with wit and humour. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
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Hi Tom, I enjoyed your story a lot, and found your introduction about how you were opposites in every way expressed with wit and humour. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A simple story of happenstance. The telling is romantic without being sappy. The words are not purple as so often happens with love stories. The only contrived part was the complete opposite which was a bit corny.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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A simple story of happenstance. The telling is romantic without being sappy. The words are not purple as so often happens with love stories. The only contrived part was the complete opposite which was a bit corny.
A nice read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Romantic humor and I see your point.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You did it again. You have a great love story. And yes, opposites do attract. My husband and I were different as day and night. We fought, we loved, we divorced, we remarried during forty-eight years of marriage. If, I could do it again, I would. May he rest in peace. And, again, keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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You did it again. You have a great love story. And yes, opposites do attract. My husband and I were different as day and night. We fought, we loved, we divorced, we remarried during forty-eight years of marriage. If, I could do it again, I would. May he rest in peace. And, again, keep up the great work.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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you betchum as Sarah P would say.
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Have a great day.
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed reading your story of the attraction of opposites leading to a happily long-lasting marriage. There is plenty of humour and lots of scene-setting details in your well written story. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed reading your story of the attraction of opposites leading to a happily long-lasting marriage. There is plenty of humour and lots of scene-setting details in your well written story. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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thanks
Comment from Wanda Broadhead
An interesting, and somewhat whimsical story about someone finding their opposite, in a funny kind of unexpected way.
It piqued my interest enough to complete my reading of the story.
The imagery was pretty well-done, I could picture both of them and the almost-fiasco that occurred
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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An interesting, and somewhat whimsical story about someone finding their opposite, in a funny kind of unexpected way.
It piqued my interest enough to complete my reading of the story.
The imagery was pretty well-done, I could picture both of them and the almost-fiasco that occurred
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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It made me laugh. How many points did you get for reviewing? I promoted it for 9.95 but see only the preview amount listed.
