To China, With Love
What kind of man could love inhumane ways?5 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have 3 votes now.
I wasn't sure where all the sweet talk and praises were leading to but the surprise and smart ending put all in perspective.
Der Fuhrer, also had no respect for life , believed in ethic cleansing and killed millions of innocent people.
Both ruthless and both made from the same dough.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you have 3 votes now.
I wasn't sure where all the sweet talk and praises were leading to but the surprise and smart ending put all in perspective.
Der Fuhrer, also had no respect for life , believed in ethic cleansing and killed millions of innocent people.
Both ruthless and both made from the same dough.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind response and wonderful rating.
Comment from Patty Palmer
LOL You did a great job on this contest entry and I'm sure it wasn't easy to do. I liked the way you approached it. I am not watching the Olympics but I've heard about how the athletes are not being treated well. The food is bad and not enough of it to sustain their strength. I will be glad when the Olympics are over and all the athletes get home safely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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LOL You did a great job on this contest entry and I'm sure it wasn't easy to do. I liked the way you approached it. I am not watching the Olympics but I've heard about how the athletes are not being treated well. The food is bad and not enough of it to sustain their strength. I will be glad when the Olympics are over and all the athletes get home safely. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 13-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind response and wonderful rating.
Comment from SimianSavant
Hahaha!! This made me laugh more than I was expecting. A nice slow windup with a fantastic punchline to the gut. I did Nazi it coming.
I have a couple small suggestions for smoothing out your meter:
I'm completely committed to your wonderful plan <= lots of syllables, one or two too many. Try: I'm completely on board with your wonderful plan, or I'm so enthralled with your wonderful plan
Just know, precious darling, that I firmly agree <= eliminate *that*; the comma makes it unnecessary and it adds one beat too many to the meter.
Awesome entry for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck,
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Hahaha!! This made me laugh more than I was expecting. A nice slow windup with a fantastic punchline to the gut. I did Nazi it coming.
I have a couple small suggestions for smoothing out your meter:
I'm completely committed to your wonderful plan <= lots of syllables, one or two too many. Try: I'm completely on board with your wonderful plan, or I'm so enthralled with your wonderful plan
Just know, precious darling, that I firmly agree <= eliminate *that*; the comma makes it unnecessary and it adds one beat too many to the meter.
Awesome entry for the contest. I wish you the very best of luck,
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your very helpful response and wonderful rating.
Comment from Susan Newell
Your satirical poem is beautifully composed to show the evil that pervades China under the CCP. I think is outrageous that we are participating in the Olympics. Hopefully the rest of the world will wake up to how they are exerting control everywhere.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Your satirical poem is beautifully composed to show the evil that pervades China under the CCP. I think is outrageous that we are participating in the Olympics. Hopefully the rest of the world will wake up to how they are exerting control everywhere.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and THANK YOU for seeing that I was trying to be satirical. I appreciate your input and your generous rating.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jeff Flaig
Clever write. Today if Hitler went to war, China would probably be its ally, as Japan was in WWII, and in the end, China would take him out. One thing about evil, it can't stand evil.
Nice twist at the end. I was beginning to wonder. ;-)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Clever write. Today if Hitler went to war, China would probably be its ally, as Japan was in WWII, and in the end, China would take him out. One thing about evil, it can't stand evil.
Nice twist at the end. I was beginning to wonder. ;-)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words and generous rating.
