Boosting The Truth
A new side effect. (356 words)9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Oh that is so funny and clever! You have built up so well to the denouement in the final line. It is different and original, and I wish you well for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Oh that is so funny and clever! You have built up so well to the denouement in the final line. It is different and original, and I wish you well for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thanks Wendy - I fear it isn't action-packed enough for voters, but I had fun writing it.
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I liked it because it wasn't as overly dramatic as the others, and I also liked the skill you displayed. I voted for yours.
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Thanks for your support!
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Boosting the Truth, tells an odd story about getting the vaccine and some play on dialectic pronunciation.
.......................pHARMaceuticals is a gem word...............................
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This story, Boosting the Truth, tells an odd story about getting the vaccine and some play on dialectic pronunciation.
.......................pHARMaceuticals is a gem word...............................
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
Comment from royowen
I must admit, like, it seems, many have side affect symptoms, but I don't personally know ANYone who has, my wife, myself, my kids and grands, and friends, absolutely nobody, we've had three jabs, most of us, bur c'est la vie, best done, blessings Roy
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I must admit, like, it seems, many have side affect symptoms, but I don't personally know ANYone who has, my wife, myself, my kids and grands, and friends, absolutely nobody, we've had three jabs, most of us, bur c'est la vie, best done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from Ella Jaffe
Nice story. Well written with a good theme. It's a bit straight forward so I wasn't sure where your were going with it. Thought maybe something bigger would happen. But overall it tells a good story.
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Nice story. Well written with a good theme. It's a bit straight forward so I wasn't sure where your were going with it. Thought maybe something bigger would happen. But overall it tells a good story.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Good work.
She got her two jabs. So was she going in for the booster?
"armless" - only a Brit (meant in a friendly way) could pull this joke off.
Best wishes and good luck.
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Well written. Good work.
She got her two jabs. So was she going in for the booster?
"armless" - only a Brit (meant in a friendly way) could pull this joke off.
Best wishes and good luck.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Interesting. To be or not to be, exposed to the disease, is 'apless. 'ard to understand the science behind it, especially when the good Dr. F had monies sent to China to develop it, so we are told.
I liked this; however, I got lost with the absence of the letter h in the final paragraph. Were you underwriting the shot for those coming from the facility with the Moderna shot lost one small piece of their memories??? the letter h?
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Interesting. To be or not to be, exposed to the disease, is 'apless. 'ard to understand the science behind it, especially when the good Dr. F had monies sent to China to develop it, so we are told.
I liked this; however, I got lost with the absence of the letter h in the final paragraph. Were you underwriting the shot for those coming from the facility with the Moderna shot lost one small piece of their memories??? the letter h?
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery writer a tremendous Thursday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your take on the Moderna Madness contest entry it was engaging and entertaining, good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Mystery writer a tremendous Thursday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your take on the Moderna Madness contest entry it was engaging and entertaining, good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
So all of this was just a ruse for a bad pun and joke at the end... sigh.
It's well-written with an engaging tone. best of luck come the judging.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Hi there,
So all of this was just a ruse for a bad pun and joke at the end... sigh.
It's well-written with an engaging tone. best of luck come the judging.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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I detect your sigh was more of a groan, haha.
Thanks for your comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Now no problem, the hospitals need to treat them, but they have a chance to resist COVID VIRUS, truly, it is always hard to pin down truth, booster is harmless; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Now no problem, the hospitals need to treat them, but they have a chance to resist COVID VIRUS, truly, it is always hard to pin down truth, booster is harmless; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
