Sea Monster tales
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Swimming with Sea Monsters"mermaid and her sea monster
15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We often do this on a daily basis as there is always someone with smiling teeth ready to snap at our heels, you made me smile with this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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We often do this on a daily basis as there is always someone with smiling teeth ready to snap at our heels, you made me smile with this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you. Sorry I am so late, busy life. I appreciate your positive words. Elaine
Comment from royowen
We've got a few of these long, sharp toothed ones here in Australia, they are quite dangerous crocodiles in Australia, one has to watch out when swimming here. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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We've got a few of these long, sharp toothed ones here in Australia, they are quite dangerous crocodiles in Australia, one has to watch out when swimming here. Beautifully written dear friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for taking time to read about the sea monster. I find crocodiles fascinating and have seen them in Florida. I imagine the Australian crocs are quite impressive. Thanks again. Elaine
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Yes, but they are alligators here, look the same though,
Comment from Janetsue
I like the transition you have provided from thinking of monsters and then finding out it is a cherished friend. Very creative with excellent end rhymes. A possible book is an exciting thought. Best wishes! :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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I like the transition you have provided from thinking of monsters and then finding out it is a cherished friend. Very creative with excellent end rhymes. A possible book is an exciting thought. Best wishes! :-)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Mermaids,
This is a lovely fairy tail you tell. It is like "Beauty and the Beast," with a unique twist.
I also like the symbolism of the work because it portrays someone who takes chances and swims a dangerous sea.
I'm sorry I do not have 6 stars left for your well-deserved poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Mermaids,
This is a lovely fairy tail you tell. It is like "Beauty and the Beast," with a unique twist.
I also like the symbolism of the work because it portrays someone who takes chances and swims a dangerous sea.
I'm sorry I do not have 6 stars left for your well-deserved poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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I am honored by your review. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from Bridge
Well written . I enjoyed reading it. I enjoy poems with a rhyme scheme more and so that adds to the appeal of your poem . Your artwork is spot on. With regards
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Well written . I enjoyed reading it. I enjoy poems with a rhyme scheme more and so that adds to the appeal of your poem . Your artwork is spot on. With regards
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for reading my sea monster poem and I appreciate your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from jessizero
This was interesting and beautifully written. I think it would make a spectacular book. Good luck in the future, however you proceed with this project.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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This was interesting and beautifully written. I think it would make a spectacular book. Good luck in the future, however you proceed with this project.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Very well thank you for sharing this is a very intriguing unique poem in unique phone I don't know what that is in the picture though but over and all it was a good uh thank you
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Very well thank you for sharing this is a very intriguing unique poem in unique phone I don't know what that is in the picture though but over and all it was a good uh thank you
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
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Welcome
Comment from Heather Burroughs
This would be a great start for a book. Especially fairytale type. One becomes the other or they can't be together bc of their differences. Either way, beautiful. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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This would be a great start for a book. Especially fairytale type. One becomes the other or they can't be together bc of their differences. Either way, beautiful. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you for a positive review. Elaine
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is vividly descriptive and very creative. Its fantastic whimsy, when examined, reveals a wonderful message about extreme opposites becoming fast friends.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Your poem is vividly descriptive and very creative. Its fantastic whimsy, when examined, reveals a wonderful message about extreme opposites becoming fast friends.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Melbelles
I like a lot; very descriptive. If you want to keep the format you can, though you may want to make some adjustments. In the poetry sense sometimes when you break up the sentences it flows easier. This is what I would do.
Here's an example..
a mermaid with flowing hair
swims around,
he is there
a sea monster
with teeth
so sharp,
near the reef
But again, this is just a preference. This would be great in book! Good job!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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I like a lot; very descriptive. If you want to keep the format you can, though you may want to make some adjustments. In the poetry sense sometimes when you break up the sentences it flows easier. This is what I would do.
Here's an example..
a mermaid with flowing hair
swims around,
he is there
a sea monster
with teeth
so sharp,
near the reef
But again, this is just a preference. This would be great in book! Good job!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2022
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I like your format, thanks so much. Elaine
