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Calypso Breeze-CodySchroderStory

Attack of Davy Jones' Locker

3 total reviews 
Comment from writer723
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I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2022

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from lancellot
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The structural writing is fine. The intro is good, and then the setup of a door that was previously missed. The twist and conclusion was quick and made to leave a mystery as to what clearly took the captain overboard.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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Nice twist to the ending of this story. I enjoyed reading it and had to chuckle at the end. You have a good imagination and carry it out well. Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.