My House Is A Mess
This Is why3 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Pretty good attempt at a humorous poem. Obviously written by a woman. You should try the same prompt written from the man's point of view. Was this a contest?
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
Pretty good attempt at a humorous poem. Obviously written by a woman. You should try the same prompt written from the man's point of view. Was this a contest?
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022
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Yes it was.
Comment from moonsunrise
What a great poem for a laughter poem. God knows I've felt this way many times over the years especially while my children were growing up. Your poem reminddd me of a movie I saw many years ago "Diary of a Mad Housewife".
Kudos and thanks for sharing. Great write!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
What a great poem for a laughter poem. God knows I've felt this way many times over the years especially while my children were growing up. Your poem reminddd me of a movie I saw many years ago "Diary of a Mad Housewife".
Kudos and thanks for sharing. Great write!!!!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thanks!
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
I can see you panting. As you talk, you tickle me to laugh with ease. Writing as a means of deliberately predisposing laughter is an art, and you succeeded in doing so with a show of innocence.
Congratulations for your well etched out rhymes, which I perceive you did with ease. More so; for your effective use of onomatopoeia, alliteration. Your best stimulant of laughter, to me, was when you said: your glasses were on the top of your head.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
I can see you panting. As you talk, you tickle me to laugh with ease. Writing as a means of deliberately predisposing laughter is an art, and you succeeded in doing so with a show of innocence.
Congratulations for your well etched out rhymes, which I perceive you did with ease. More so; for your effective use of onomatopoeia, alliteration. Your best stimulant of laughter, to me, was when you said: your glasses were on the top of your head.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thanks!
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Remain Blessed.
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😊
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Remain Blessed.
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You already said that.