Proposal
A Day To Remember2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Cecilia.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Your author note is appreciated.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the proposal; it is very romantic.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Cecilia.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-Your author note is appreciated.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the proposal; it is very romantic.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a protagonist's marriage proposal to a prospective wife; with an adorable silhouette of the duo to match.
The work verbally and pictorially highlights his open confession of his love; his quest to make her his wife and a bow as allegiance accoutrement to enable them execute their nuptial ties.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of seductive anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a protagonist's marriage proposal to a prospective wife; with an adorable silhouette of the duo to match.
The work verbally and pictorially highlights his open confession of his love; his quest to make her his wife and a bow as allegiance accoutrement to enable them execute their nuptial ties.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of seductive anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging review and generous rating. Very much appreciated.
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Remain Blessed
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Remain Blessed
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Thank you for your valuable review and generous rating. Very much appreciated.
