The Writings of a Mouse
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "I Cry"Pieces of my Heart
18 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was very sad. This happens to many. This touched my heart. And it will many. I feel your pain. It was so heartfelt, I could feel the pain. Thank you for posting. And, you will never be the same. I know exactly how you feel. I lost my parents, and my husband of forty-eight years. Good Luck.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This was very sad. This happens to many. This touched my heart. And it will many. I feel your pain. It was so heartfelt, I could feel the pain. Thank you for posting. And, you will never be the same. I know exactly how you feel. I lost my parents, and my husband of forty-eight years. Good Luck.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your understanding and your kind review. I could not ask for more soothing words. My heart breaks for the loses you have suffered.
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Thank you.
Comment from jenintorre
This poem has really touched me. It is written from the heart and is so tragic. My heart goes out to you. What more can I say. There are no words. Good luck in the competitio . Jen
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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This poem has really touched me. It is written from the heart and is so tragic. My heart goes out to you. What more can I say. There are no words. Good luck in the competitio . Jen
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much Jen. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is so expressive of your deepest feelings, of the tears you've shed, and of your unerring love for and devotion to your mother. You have used vivid details.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Your poem is so expressive of your deepest feelings, of the tears you've shed, and of your unerring love for and devotion to your mother. You have used vivid details.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Your poem talks about something we all will struggle with. You did a great job of describing the emotional roller coaster ride. Thank you for sharing a very personal pain.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Your poem talks about something we all will struggle with. You did a great job of describing the emotional roller coaster ride. Thank you for sharing a very personal pain.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. This was one of the hardest times of my life.
Comment from Teri7
Thank you for sharing with us this heartfelt poem. I am so sorry for the loss of your mother. It is hard I know because I lost my mom. Great poem. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing with us this heartfelt poem. I am so sorry for the loss of your mother. It is hard I know because I lost my mom. Great poem. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Teri. My deepest condolences for your loss too. It is one of the hardest losses I think. Love and blessings to you also.
Comment from jessizero
I am sorry for your loss. Your poem is sad and beautiful. My mother is one of my best friends, too. I can't imagine your pain. I hope you find peace.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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I am sorry for your loss. Your poem is sad and beautiful. My mother is one of my best friends, too. I can't imagine your pain. I hope you find peace.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much. You are truly blessed to still have your best friend. Love and blessings.
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem . I am so sorry for your loss. My mother is my best friend too . I haven't seen her for a year because of covid. I wish you the very best
With regards
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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A beautiful poem . I am so sorry for your loss. My mother is my best friend too . I haven't seen her for a year because of covid. I wish you the very best
With regards
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Bless you. It must be so very hard to not be able to to be together. This pandemic has been so hard. Thank you your kind review. I miss my mom each day.
Comment from royowen
This was beautifully written my friend. I know what it's like to lose a parent, my wife and I are technically orphans. But we're still here for our daughters and our grandchildren. It's so good to see them doing well, I know they will sorrow, but we want to see our grands take the world by storm, beautifully written my friend, great write, sorry for your loss, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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This was beautifully written my friend. I know what it's like to lose a parent, my wife and I are technically orphans. But we're still here for our daughters and our grandchildren. It's so good to see them doing well, I know they will sorrow, but we want to see our grands take the world by storm, beautifully written my friend, great write, sorry for your loss, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank so so much for your understanding Roy. I?m sorry for yours and your wife?s losses. Nothing hurts more than losing a parent if only we could spare our children the same grief. For myself it?s not an issue as I have no children but I feel the pain for others. I know my Mom thought she was sparing me. Perhaps she did. Thank you for the nice review. Blessings to you to my friend.
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Bless you,
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it though it was poignant. I could feel the sadness and the disbelief until the end. Your lines read smoothly with great imagery. There's good flow, too. I hope you got a bit of closure as you wrote this. Your mom will always live in your heart.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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You did a good job with your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it though it was poignant. I could feel the sadness and the disbelief until the end. Your lines read smoothly with great imagery. There's good flow, too. I hope you got a bit of closure as you wrote this. Your mom will always live in your heart.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Bless you Jan and thank you for the kind words and your beautiful review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I Cry ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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'I Cry ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. This talented poet's work was a privilege to read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your praise! I am speechless. Thank you so much! I will.
Ramona Agin, I'm delighted to read your work again.
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duchessofdrumborg I can?t wait to read yours! Thank you so much!
