Charger (A Cody Schroder Story)
Cody Involves Sheriff Daniels In A Kidnapping7 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Melissa has been missing for six months. Is she even alive? I must read pictures...is this in your portfolio? Cody sounds like a great boy to be around; he sure gets involved with Melissa's case.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
  |
Melissa has been missing for six months. Is she even alive? I must read pictures...is this in your portfolio? Cody sounds like a great boy to be around; he sure gets involved with Melissa's case.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
-
Yes, Pictures is in my portfolio. Appreciate the review.
Comment from AliMom
Let me begin by saying what a great and intriguing story this is. I want to read the rest of it to see what the outcome may be. I like the thoughts he entertains while his friend or the sheriff is engaged in thinking or speaking aloud. I also was intrigued by the hint that he might have suffered some trauma in his own life which gives him additional insight into the minds of victims and criminals. A well-written piece. The 'stop' for the contest requirement kind of gets lost in the content. For me, it is not the centerpiece of the text but the contest never said it had to be. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
|
Let me begin by saying what a great and intriguing story this is. I want to read the rest of it to see what the outcome may be. I like the thoughts he entertains while his friend or the sheriff is engaged in thinking or speaking aloud. I also was intrigued by the hint that he might have suffered some trauma in his own life which gives him additional insight into the minds of victims and criminals. A well-written piece. The 'stop' for the contest requirement kind of gets lost in the content. For me, it is not the centerpiece of the text but the contest never said it had to be. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the insightful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your story of Cody and Milton about Melissa's disappearance . Excellent entry for the Stop writing prompt contest. As far as I can tell, you followed the rules of the contest well. Nice story in its entirety and compelling in structure. It flows throughout and the story is engaging.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
|
I like your story of Cody and Milton about Melissa's disappearance . Excellent entry for the Stop writing prompt contest. As far as I can tell, you followed the rules of the contest well. Nice story in its entirety and compelling in structure. It flows throughout and the story is engaging.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed this story. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Jennifer Keeley
The story grabs your attention and holds it because the outcome is still uncertain. It almost felt like I (being the reader) was right there hearing the dialogue take place. It is always nice, even if just one bit of information connects, because it keeps the story going.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
|
The story grabs your attention and holds it because the outcome is still uncertain. It almost felt like I (being the reader) was right there hearing the dialogue take place. It is always nice, even if just one bit of information connects, because it keeps the story going.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
I must admit, I'd rather be charged and tried under British law than any other, the charge always assumes innocence, the onus being on the prosecution to prove guilt beyond all reasonable doubt. So they are right, I think I've seen and heard so many trials by innuendo and rumour by the public that I am much more confident in justice. This episode is full of good information, regarding that end. Well done Brett, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
|
I must admit, I'd rather be charged and tried under British law than any other, the charge always assumes innocence, the onus being on the prosecution to prove guilt beyond all reasonable doubt. So they are right, I think I've seen and heard so many trials by innuendo and rumour by the public that I am much more confident in justice. This episode is full of good information, regarding that end. Well done Brett, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
-
Most welcome
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend! Perfect for the Stop writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend;-)
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
|
Excellent story my friend! Perfect for the Stop writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend;-)
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed Cody's little escapade. Appreciate the review.
-
;-)
Comment from wilkswrites
This was sad but intriguing. You did an awesome job of introducing to your reader imagery, detail, suspense, and It read like a real detective story. I look forward to reading more. Will there be more?
Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
 |
This was sad but intriguing. You did an awesome job of introducing to your reader imagery, detail, suspense, and It read like a real detective story. I look forward to reading more. Will there be more?
Great job!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
-
Appreciate the review and insights. Glad you enjoyed this little escapade of Cody's.
