They Walked Home From The Morgue
Six dead men walked their home from the morgue33 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm so sorry - but I didn't get this.
I understood that these guys all took the vaccines and boosters for COVID, but got sick anyway. (Check!)
I understood that they all died, went to the morgue, and then got up and left that place --> evidently because God released them to leave.
The part about God being Dr. Dawn AND the part about God disappearing I did not understand. I strongly recommend editing for clarity. Thanks and good luck!
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm so sorry - but I didn't get this.
I understood that these guys all took the vaccines and boosters for COVID, but got sick anyway. (Check!)
I understood that they all died, went to the morgue, and then got up and left that place --> evidently because God released them to leave.
The part about God being Dr. Dawn AND the part about God disappearing I did not understand. I strongly recommend editing for clarity. Thanks and good luck!
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Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Nameless poet a happy Tuesday to you, hope this review finds you well. Writing any kind of story in 33 words has to be pretty difficult, especially with that topic. I wouldn't attempt it but thank you for doing it, good job and good luck in the contest!
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Hello Nameless poet a happy Tuesday to you, hope this review finds you well. Writing any kind of story in 33 words has to be pretty difficult, especially with that topic. I wouldn't attempt it but thank you for doing it, good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' They Walked Home From The Morgue ', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
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' They Walked Home From The Morgue ', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from lyenochka
This is a very strange story. God would never disappear as He is in control over the universe. You did tell a story in these thirty-three words but I'm not sure what the intent is other than to show utter hopelessness.
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This is a very strange story. God would never disappear as He is in control over the universe. You did tell a story in these thirty-three words but I'm not sure what the intent is other than to show utter hopelessness.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
I think the story is well written, but I didn't understand the "Dr. Dawn" refence.
Maybe it is a cultural difference.
None the less, thank you for sharing your writing with us.
Gee
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I think the story is well written, but I didn't understand the "Dr. Dawn" refence.
Maybe it is a cultural difference.
None the less, thank you for sharing your writing with us.
Gee
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from humpwhistle
'Coronavirus does'--I wonder if you vaccine doses? That changes the whole story, in my view. Truth is, the vaccine doesn't claim to prevent the disease, only mitigate its effects. In any case, a sample size of three isn't very useful. Perhaps I need to read this a few more times.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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'Coronavirus does'--I wonder if you vaccine doses? That changes the whole story, in my view. Truth is, the vaccine doesn't claim to prevent the disease, only mitigate its effects. In any case, a sample size of three isn't very useful. Perhaps I need to read this a few more times.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I understand that even though they took the 3 vaccines they still died and Fauci played God. I'm pretty sure you're the same author as the previous post I read. The style is the same. I get this one.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I understand that even though they took the 3 vaccines they still died and Fauci played God. I'm pretty sure you're the same author as the previous post I read. The style is the same. I get this one.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
Well,I guess this fulfills the word count requirement and God was mentioned, so I suppose it fills the spiritual requirement as well. Other than that, I see this as a walking dead story with six folks who were definitely marked for death.
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Well,I guess this fulfills the word count requirement and God was mentioned, so I suppose it fills the spiritual requirement as well. Other than that, I see this as a walking dead story with six folks who were definitely marked for death.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from giraffmang
hi there,
This bears a startling similarity to a piece I literally just read. Same author, but feels like the same piece with just the occupations changed. Another denunciation of vaccines...
All the best
GMG
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hi there,
This bears a startling similarity to a piece I literally just read. Same author, but feels like the same piece with just the occupations changed. Another denunciation of vaccines...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
Comment from tfawcus
This seems to talk of a miracle of resurrection from the dead performed by God in the guise of Dr Dawn so that even though the six subjects died, they were able to return home to their loved ones.
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This seems to talk of a miracle of resurrection from the dead performed by God in the guise of Dr Dawn so that even though the six subjects died, they were able to return home to their loved ones.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
