My Valentine
A Valentine Entry21 total reviews
Comment from Mickamus J
Great words, simple and to the point. Love the imagery created in my mind. Love melded and divine. It is true that hearts flutter with love.
Cheers! Have a great day!
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Great words, simple and to the point. Love the imagery created in my mind. Love melded and divine. It is true that hearts flutter with love.
Cheers! Have a great day!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Beautiful poem. It reminds me of young and/or new love. Perfect for this contest. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
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Beautiful poem. It reminds me of young and/or new love. Perfect for this contest. Good luck with your entry in the upcoming contest. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 16-Feb-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed the message of your writing and the sentiment is heartfelt. I'm a hopeless romantic, so this speaks to my heart. The artwork you chose is perfect, well done!
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I enjoyed the message of your writing and the sentiment is heartfelt. I'm a hopeless romantic, so this speaks to my heart. The artwork you chose is perfect, well done!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello 13th poet, your poem is sweet and it made me smile. I could feel the love and romance within. I especially liked:
hearts a flutter
yours and mine
(Cupid strikes again!)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomr
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Hello 13th poet, your poem is sweet and it made me smile. I could feel the love and romance within. I especially liked:
hearts a flutter
yours and mine
(Cupid strikes again!)
Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomr
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Chris Davies
A lovely poem for your Valentine! You're making it awfully difficult to score in any contests :-). Wish you the best of luck in the contest - you've surely written a winner.
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A lovely poem for your Valentine! You're making it awfully difficult to score in any contests :-). Wish you the best of luck in the contest - you've surely written a winner.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables in this lovely, romantic poem. Special days do have a way of "defining" love that exists every day.
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You have made excellent use of your twenty syllables in this lovely, romantic poem. Special days do have a way of "defining" love that exists every day.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Great flow of natural wording and unforced rhymes! I like the emotional depiction (hearts a-flutter), the Cupid reference (arrows fly) but I like best "love's defined." Best wishes in the contest!
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Great flow of natural wording and unforced rhymes! I like the emotional depiction (hearts a-flutter), the Cupid reference (arrows fly) but I like best "love's defined." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I like and have enjoyed the read of this poem on Valentine, you have expressed the essence and how you wish for and celebrate Valentine's Day; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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I like and have enjoyed the read of this poem on Valentine, you have expressed the essence and how you wish for and celebrate Valentine's Day; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
Pretty good valentine poem in just a few short lines. I see no capital letters except in "Valentine". Any special reason for this? Good entry for the contest.
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Pretty good valentine poem in just a few short lines. I see no capital letters except in "Valentine". Any special reason for this? Good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
Comment from lindafisher
This is a really good piece of rhyming poetry. The rhyme is flawless and flows without effort.. It says so much in such a few words. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a really good piece of rhyming poetry. The rhyme is flawless and flows without effort.. It says so much in such a few words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2022
