The Great Molasses Flood
not from Charlie and the Chocolate Factory2 total reviews
Comment from Pamplemousse1
Hello Poet, this is such a rollicking tale told with tongue planted firmly in cheek. The mono-rhyming was very well done, as was the use of anapestic meter throughout. It gave the poem a whimsical tall tale feeling. Very skillful write.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Hello Poet, this is such a rollicking tale told with tongue planted firmly in cheek. The mono-rhyming was very well done, as was the use of anapestic meter throughout. It gave the poem a whimsical tall tale feeling. Very skillful write.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for this killer review. You picked up on things I didn't even realize were there, which may be helpful to try again in some of my future writing. Much appreciated!
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You are very welcome! It was a really great read.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Certainly a freakish disaster but one you have described in a humorous and uplifting manner. Had a few laughs reading along with this and the photograph is certainly apt. What a sticky mess. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Certainly a freakish disaster but one you have described in a humorous and uplifting manner. Had a few laughs reading along with this and the photograph is certainly apt. What a sticky mess. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Barry! Much appreciated.