''Brief'' Shopping Expedition
Scott learns that size matters35 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent work. I enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure that Barbie would need, or benefit by boosting her udders though.
Good luck with your future writings.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
  |
Excellent work. I enjoyed reading it. I'm not sure that Barbie would need, or benefit by boosting her udders though.
Good luck with your future writings.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
Thanks Wayne--nice to see you again. I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am really going to miss you and your stories. I will have to remember to go to your profile page. I rarely ever go to those pages. I do hope you will continue to read my story. If I've messed up, send me a PM. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
I am really going to miss you and your stories. I will have to remember to go to your profile page. I rarely ever go to those pages. I do hope you will continue to read my story. If I've messed up, send me a PM. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from judiverse
This is so funny. I love your description of the Ken and Barbie couple and her assessment of Scott as being a size "small." Can't believe he hadn't been in the habit of buying his own underwear. He must have had his for quite a while. I am sorely tempted to "Borrow" Scott. As I've written before, he deserves to be in a sit com. Best of luck with your new endeavors. judi
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
This is so funny. I love your description of the Ken and Barbie couple and her assessment of Scott as being a size "small." Can't believe he hadn't been in the habit of buying his own underwear. He must have had his for quite a while. I am sorely tempted to "Borrow" Scott. As I've written before, he deserves to be in a sit com. Best of luck with your new endeavors. judi
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is a funny story. I think it's amazing how many men can't buy their own clothes. You did an excellent job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
This is a funny story. I think it's amazing how many men can't buy their own clothes. You did an excellent job. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Father Flaps
Hahahaha! I can just picture "Ken & Barbie" waiting impatiently behind Scotty, and Barbie glancing down at Scott's "package" whispering, "Small". That's so funny, but awesome imagery.
I like this paragraph, too...
"As Scott stood stupefied, he felt the presence of someone behind him. He turned and beheld Barbie and Ken incarnate -- and upgraded. It looked as if Ken had beefed up with steroids and Barbie had boosted her udders."
I'm going to miss your posts, Liz!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
 |
Hahahaha! I can just picture "Ken & Barbie" waiting impatiently behind Scotty, and Barbie glancing down at Scott's "package" whispering, "Small". That's so funny, but awesome imagery.
I like this paragraph, too...
"As Scott stood stupefied, he felt the presence of someone behind him. He turned and beheld Barbie and Ken incarnate -- and upgraded. It looked as if Ken had beefed up with steroids and Barbie had boosted her udders."
I'm going to miss your posts, Liz!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
Thanksssssss! I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Liz.
I'm a little surprised that Ken and Barbie would shop at a store with a going out of business sale. I would expect to see them at the most exclusive store in the neighborhood. After all, they are special.
Fortunately, Scott was able to get exactly what he needed at the store and as soon as he walks out the door with his treasures, Ken and Barbie are just a memory. Scott wins, because he got what he wanted and needed.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
Hello Liz.
I'm a little surprised that Ken and Barbie would shop at a store with a going out of business sale. I would expect to see them at the most exclusive store in the neighborhood. After all, they are special.
Fortunately, Scott was able to get exactly what he needed at the store and as soon as he walks out the door with his treasures, Ken and Barbie are just a memory. Scott wins, because he got what he wanted and needed.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
-
30 years can take a toll on underwear.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I'll sure miss getting those morning wake posts that start my day out with a laugh. But I certainly understand when it's time to move on to bigger and better things. I wish you all the luck and happiness in your new venture, and I hope we cross paths somewhere along the way. :-)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
Well, I'll sure miss getting those morning wake posts that start my day out with a laugh. But I certainly understand when it's time to move on to bigger and better things. I wish you all the luck and happiness in your new venture, and I hope we cross paths somewhere along the way. :-)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Scott is such a nice guy that he even admitted to a stranger that his mother bought his underwear and that was the reason he was taking his time trying to decide what to buy. The "Barbie" was just plain mean.
I will miss your reviews and stories, but I wish you the very best always.
I will look for your repromotions.
Best wishes always,
Mary
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
Scott is such a nice guy that he even admitted to a stranger that his mother bought his underwear and that was the reason he was taking his time trying to decide what to buy. The "Barbie" was just plain mean.
I will miss your reviews and stories, but I wish you the very best always.
I will look for your repromotions.
Best wishes always,
Mary
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Judy Lawless
Oh my goodness, how embarrassing for Scott! I'm surprised he, a grown man, admitted his mother had always bought his undies for him. I think I would have discretely had a chuckle too, but Barbie was just plain mean. Thanks for sharing this final post. I'll watch for your promotions of other work. Since I just joined here in November of 2020, I probably missed a lot. Hugs.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
Oh my goodness, how embarrassing for Scott! I'm surprised he, a grown man, admitted his mother had always bought his undies for him. I think I would have discretely had a chuckle too, but Barbie was just plain mean. Thanks for sharing this final post. I'll watch for your promotions of other work. Since I just joined here in November of 2020, I probably missed a lot. Hugs.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
-
30 years! OMG! I guess they would have been in shreds. Lol good job.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a great note to go out on Liz. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I will miss you. Maybe it'll be like some others and you'll find your way back to us? Hope so. Love Kate xx
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
|
This is a great note to go out on Liz. I've said it before and I'll say it again, I will miss you. Maybe it'll be like some others and you'll find your way back to us? Hope so. Love Kate xx
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
-
I had fun with this one. His mother has been dead for 30 years--his underwear must have been in shreds! Cheers. LIZ
