Comment from SimianSavant

Exceptional

As a piece of literature this needs some work but giving this a six for mentioning the Cincinnati Zoo and Harambe in the video you linked.

A couple edits:

round the clock care <=round-the-clock would be preferable

a true diva at heart ,she sure loves <= adjust placement of comma

Hooray for Fiona! Sadly I keep missing Fiona on visits to the zoo but maybe I will see her soon.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022

Ciao !

I appreciate the constructive feedback .. glad when anyone helps me with my English .( biggrin)

I will edit.

Glad you enjoyed the video .. and the cheeky pic too I hope.

She has such a bright and loveable personality!

Thank you for the extra shinny star despite the poor punctuation.

PS: Harambe s death I feel could have been avoided ..why not try to get the caretakers he was familiar with, to distract him ..

Ultimately parents should be more alert and keep their kids in check especially when near potential threats.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet and endearing poem about this Hippo who survived against he odds to live and be happy. Such a lovely hopeful story in this poem and I really enjoyed the sentiments here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022

Thank you for the kind review!

Yes Fiona is a tough cookie and I love her bright personality!

Glad you were touched by her story !

Keep safe!

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Even a baby hippo is cute. This is the first I've heard of Fiona. I'm glad she's okay and she's enjoying the pool with her mom. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022

Thanks for stopping to review.. I m still editing the poem .. made a mistake with the deadline

thought I still had hours. Woke up and I got a shock

Glad you loved the video .. she is really a cutie!

Take care!