No manners
They eat and run9 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
You sound like a very caring person. Maybe they have had bad experiences and are still nervous, but will adopt you later at a time of their own choosing - being very independent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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You sound like a very caring person. Maybe they have had bad experiences and are still nervous, but will adopt you later at a time of their own choosing - being very independent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you Wendy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
cute image; like your poem; like the rhyming, simple words; did you draw the illustrations? I know that Fan Art Review has some some great illustrations on their website. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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cute image; like your poem; like the rhyming, simple words; did you draw the illustrations? I know that Fan Art Review has some some great illustrations on their website. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thanks. The picture is FanArt
Comment from moongirlwriter
Yup. . .those be feral cats for sure. Such ingrates. Love the image and the poem. Makes me think of all the feral cats at the harbor where I would take my daily walks. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Yup. . .those be feral cats for sure. Such ingrates. Love the image and the poem. Makes me think of all the feral cats at the harbor where I would take my daily walks. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank yoy so much
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Cute Animal Poem writing prompt contest. You met all the contest requirements.
I like the good humor.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the Cute Animal Poem writing prompt contest. You met all the contest requirements.
I like the good humor.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Gypsy
Comment from Gee
Very cute.
Rude cats. Not that uncommon...lol
I like the pic you chose also.
Good Luck in the competition.
I hope you do well
Thank you so much for sharing with us.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Very cute.
Rude cats. Not that uncommon...lol
I like the pic you chose also.
Good Luck in the competition.
I hope you do well
Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha that's for you a cat attitude:"
So ungrateful
for their food
I wish they wouldn't
be so rude." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Ha, ha, ha that's for you a cat attitude:"
So ungrateful
for their food
I wish they wouldn't
be so rude." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Lol. Those independent stray cats are so rude! They like their independence and aren't much for cuddling or stroking. Individualistic like the American ideal.1
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Lol. Those independent stray cats are so rude! They like their independence and aren't much for cuddling or stroking. Individualistic like the American ideal.1
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Though I do not feed ferals myself, I know people who do. And you have captured the essence of many of those flighty little creatures to perfection. Love the artwork you chose to illustrate your piece, as well.
Only noted one needed correction. Change "would'nt" to "wouldn't" and you should be good to go. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Though I do not feed ferals myself, I know people who do. And you have captured the essence of many of those flighty little creatures to perfection. Love the artwork you chose to illustrate your piece, as well.
Only noted one needed correction. Change "would'nt" to "wouldn't" and you should be good to go. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Sherry.
Comment from zanya
Yes this poem certainly captures the idea of the Cute Animal Poem - told with a lovely humorous touch about these endearing 'stray cats' and their 'rude' table manners
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Yes this poem certainly captures the idea of the Cute Animal Poem - told with a lovely humorous touch about these endearing 'stray cats' and their 'rude' table manners
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Zanya for the great review and stars. Much appreciated.
