Baseball
There's Many Reasons Why3 total reviews
Comment from Karen Estep
I think you did a very good job describing the aspects of baseball. If I may, I think you could have added even more if you added something about the smell of hot and popcorn, or the echos when the ball is hit. You did a great job! keep writing!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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I think you did a very good job describing the aspects of baseball. If I may, I think you could have added even more if you added something about the smell of hot and popcorn, or the echos when the ball is hit. You did a great job! keep writing!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Not doing well in contest
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No popcorn in baseball.
Comment from Ethan Vandervelden
Good poem. Clear and smooth flow with no hidden agenda or meanings. It is a nice length and summarizes baseball quite well. This was a cool way to express your love for baseball. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Good poem. Clear and smooth flow with no hidden agenda or meanings. It is a nice length and summarizes baseball quite well. This was a cool way to express your love for baseball. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks.
Comment from Earl Corp
I wish I still had a six star rating left for you. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was about America's pastime! Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I wish I still had a six star rating left for you. Your poem rhymed, made sense, and was about America's pastime! Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thanks
