The Urical (Not oracle)
A ballad.28 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Amusing notes to explain where this word came from Roy. I could just imagine the expression on the child's face wondering how you would sit on that. Looking forward to hearing more of their invented words. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Amusing notes to explain where this word came from Roy. I could just imagine the expression on the child's face wondering how you would sit on that. Looking forward to hearing more of their invented words. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thanks again Valda for your super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is so far out of your usual forte and you had so much fun with it. It is a delight to read both in your words and the joy of children being inquisitive and inventive.
I do not remember a poem or picture on this subject, however, you made it interesting and fun.
Blessings,
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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This is so far out of your usual forte and you had so much fun with it. It is a delight to read both in your words and the joy of children being inquisitive and inventive.
I do not remember a poem or picture on this subject, however, you made it interesting and fun.
Blessings,
Mary
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2022
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Thanks Mary, for your excellent comments and a kind review, blessings Roy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
quite the clever poem you wrote. I can imagine that when your grandsons seen these bathroom accessories they thought, what are these things; until they were old enough to use them the correct way.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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quite the clever poem you wrote. I can imagine that when your grandsons seen these bathroom accessories they thought, what are these things; until they were old enough to use them the correct way.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks for Rosemary, this great review and comments Julia, blessings Roy
Comment from GeraldShuler
I don't know if these stars should go to Miah for being brilliant or to you for recognising his brilliance. You did a wonderful job writing about a topic one would never expect to find with such quality in a poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I don't know if these stars should go to Miah for being brilliant or to you for recognising his brilliance. You did a wonderful job writing about a topic one would never expect to find with such quality in a poem. Well done!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gerald, for this great review and comments, blessings Roy
Comment from rjuselius
Haha. This is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear Roy! This is way out of your usual topic but you deliver it nicely. Love your grandson!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Haha. This is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear Roy! This is way out of your usual topic but you deliver it nicely. Love your grandson!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Rebekka, for this terrific review and great comments blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
I too would be sad without the inspirations and imaginations of my grandchildren. They image things so much differently than their cynical adults. I loved it! thanks for sharing.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I too would be sad without the inspirations and imaginations of my grandchildren. They image things so much differently than their cynical adults. I loved it! thanks for sharing.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Carol , for this terrific review and great comments (are you OK.?)blessings Roy
Comment from MissMerri
I too love how children are so creative in their language. This is a totally delightful poem illustrating the way a child's mind works and sure to bring to the minds of your readers some instances of their own where children have labeled things or described things so uniquely. I do hope you will do many more like this. It was fun and funny and well-done. MM
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I too love how children are so creative in their language. This is a totally delightful poem illustrating the way a child's mind works and sure to bring to the minds of your readers some instances of their own where children have labeled things or described things so uniquely. I do hope you will do many more like this. It was fun and funny and well-done. MM
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Adonna, for this terrific review and great comments blessings Roy
Comment from Cristine22
I love the words that kids make up. "Uricle" is such a great one. This poem is really fun and has a great rhythm, and I love that you came up with it from the word of your grandchild.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I love the words that kids make up. "Uricle" is such a great one. This poem is really fun and has a great rhythm, and I love that you came up with it from the word of your grandchild.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Cristine, for this terrific review and great comments blessings Roy
Comment from aryr
Roy, I am so sorry but this picture and poem were terribly hilarious. I am so glad you added narrative notes, because otherwise I wouldn't know about your grandsons. Poor granddaughter, she was amazed and totally astonished by the fact that all the Uricals where lined up in a row with no place to sit. LOL. Blessings.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Roy, I am so sorry but this picture and poem were terribly hilarious. I am so glad you added narrative notes, because otherwise I wouldn't know about your grandsons. Poor granddaughter, she was amazed and totally astonished by the fact that all the Uricals where lined up in a row with no place to sit. LOL. Blessings.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Alie, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome, Roy, blessings.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Roy
Your ballad.
The Urical (Not oracle)
So your not a oracle. I see you are wise to come up something fun; add a new word to our (English) vocabulary.
I say make us happy and have fun with you new words
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Roy
Your ballad.
The Urical (Not oracle)
So your not a oracle. I see you are wise to come up something fun; add a new word to our (English) vocabulary.
I say make us happy and have fun with you new words
Gert
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gert, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are most welcome Roy
Gert
