For A Better Day
Keep looking for tomorrow48 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, life can be hard sometimes, but there are always better times ahead. If you give kindness the kindness will find you. Shared kindness is the start of living in peace
Good poem, Jay.
Joan
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Yes, life can be hard sometimes, but there are always better times ahead. If you give kindness the kindness will find you. Shared kindness is the start of living in peace
Good poem, Jay.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from rjuselius
This beautiful poem delivers a message of hope to all beings irrelevant of background. Very well written with a strong punch!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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This beautiful poem delivers a message of hope to all beings irrelevant of background. Very well written with a strong punch!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
Another inspirational poem from the Master. I really like the third verse with inspiration leading the way along with love, compassion, and peace. That is excellent imagery. Good Work.
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Another inspirational poem from the Master. I really like the third verse with inspiration leading the way along with love, compassion, and peace. That is excellent imagery. Good Work.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
This is so beautiful. Living with a positive mindset will give you positive results. Release all illusions. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry. The words say so much.
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This is so beautiful. Living with a positive mindset will give you positive results. Release all illusions. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poetry. The words say so much.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from heavenempress
Excellent piece of poetry. Keep it up writing motivational messages full of hope.We need tomorrow. I highly recommend your work to others. You got a good English command.
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Excellent piece of poetry. Keep it up writing motivational messages full of hope.We need tomorrow. I highly recommend your work to others. You got a good English command.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from zanya
Yes these sentiments remind us of the many challenges we face as we journey on 'Life's hills are steep' but 'with love, compassion, peace' we will be enabled
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Yes these sentiments remind us of the many challenges we face as we journey on 'Life's hills are steep' but 'with love, compassion, peace' we will be enabled
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Ben Colder
For sure, poet. Many have yet to understand the depth of this writer but it is right on. God gives us all mountains to climb and with His help some succeed. Thanks for sharing.
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For sure, poet. Many have yet to understand the depth of this writer but it is right on. God gives us all mountains to climb and with His help some succeed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Hey, ol' buddy. Good poem of hope. Your poems are very uplifting. Having good thoughts of tomorrow will make a better today. Only one thing I noticed, and it was probably just a slip of the finger. In the first line of the first stanza, did you mean conquer instead of conquers?
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Hey, ol' buddy. Good poem of hope. Your poems are very uplifting. Having good thoughts of tomorrow will make a better today. Only one thing I noticed, and it was probably just a slip of the finger. In the first line of the first stanza, did you mean conquer instead of conquers?
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
Comment from MissMerri
Jay, I love how you always look on the bright side of life. This is such an optimistic and cheerful poem in spite of the acknowledgment of troubles and difficulty. As usual, your meter and rhymes are excellent and the thoughts expressed are well worth reading. I enjoyed this thoughtful and optimistic poem very much. MM
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Jay, I love how you always look on the bright side of life. This is such an optimistic and cheerful poem in spite of the acknowledgment of troubles and difficulty. As usual, your meter and rhymes are excellent and the thoughts expressed are well worth reading. I enjoyed this thoughtful and optimistic poem very much. MM
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
Comment from Boogienights
At this point we should be grateful for our tomorrow's. When we get to be my age, I'm happy with each day that dawns and I wake up. Thank you for sharing. :)
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At this point we should be grateful for our tomorrow's. When we get to be my age, I'm happy with each day that dawns and I wake up. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
