Comment from Versch

Excellent

This is an interesting entry for the contest. I can just picture out the kind of busy and yet happy life those kids have in that city. Having a big family must be really fun, and being surrounded by those animals, there's always something to do and to play with. Good luck in the contest! Ver

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022

Thanks, havevyou read all my other contest entries?

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

It must be a lot of fun to be a part of big family with shared interests. These children were very lucky to each have their own horse and to work hard to do well in competitions. Country children seemed to be athletic and to love animals. Nice story.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thanks.

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent entry for the ~ Family Story ~ (fiction) writing prompt! Best of wishes in the contest;-) The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!

Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Year!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

Thank you.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 13-Jan-2022

;-)

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022

:)

reply by Melodie Michelle on 13-Jan-2022

;-)

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022

:)

Comment from Paul McFarland

Good

I'm looking for a little more excitement, suspense, or interesting finale. I realize that it is hard to do with the limited word count, but I think you can do it.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022

I don't know what else to say, I ended it on the rodeo.