Two cemeteries -same ending
Art in an idyllic setting37 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is very well written and quite interesting. If you have a local newspaper, they might want to print this on their op-ed page or elsewhere. I think you compared the two cemeteries quite fairly to the credit of both.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is very well written and quite interesting. If you have a local newspaper, they might want to print this on their op-ed page or elsewhere. I think you compared the two cemeteries quite fairly to the credit of both.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
I am particularly glad that you think I was fair to them both.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from Shirley McLain
I loved your essay, and if I had a six, it would be yours. I saw no errors. You are right when you wrote death is the equalizer among all people. Have a blessed day. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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I loved your essay, and if I had a six, it would be yours. I saw no errors. You are right when you wrote death is the equalizer among all people. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Ths,k you Shirley for you very kind words.
I am glad you liked the story.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from The Journaler
This is a wonderful post, with a good point. At the end of life, we are more alike than not. The trappings may be different, but the end result is the same. I like how you described these two places. I have always liked cemeteries..to me they show that life mattered. This new deal of cremation and scattering ashes far and wide does not appeal to me. I love going to my parent's grave and my first husband's grave to sit and talk. Because even though their physical bodies are gone, the love remains and always will.
You have written a well thought out piece. You will find your voice again!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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This is a wonderful post, with a good point. At the end of life, we are more alike than not. The trappings may be different, but the end result is the same. I like how you described these two places. I have always liked cemeteries..to me they show that life mattered. This new deal of cremation and scattering ashes far and wide does not appeal to me. I love going to my parent's grave and my first husband's grave to sit and talk. Because even though their physical bodies are gone, the love remains and always will.
You have written a well thought out piece. You will find your voice again!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and review. It is very much appreciated. I, like you, do love visiting my mom and dad's grave, I do not want them to be forgotten.
Best wishes,
Mary
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You are welcome!
Comment from estory
I think you did a great job contrasting these two cemeteries, and in them, we see two classes of people in the world, the rich and the poor, and in the end, we all end up dead and buried. It is true: death is the great equalizer. It was interesting to see how great writers seemed to be buried in each cemetery: Longfellow in the rich one, Henry James in the poor one. estory
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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I think you did a great job contrasting these two cemeteries, and in them, we see two classes of people in the world, the rich and the poor, and in the end, we all end up dead and buried. It is true: death is the great equalizer. It was interesting to see how great writers seemed to be buried in each cemetery: Longfellow in the rich one, Henry James in the poor one. estory
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the review. I truly appreciate your kind words.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment from BethShelby
This is very impressive writing and I enjoyed reading. The first part of you essay had me convinced that if I ever get back to Massachusetts, I have to go visit this cemetery where I can see all this art and visit the graves of these important people. When I got to end of the essay, I saw your point. Those in the second cemetery may not be famous but their end is the same. Death is the great equalizer I sorry I have not six for this.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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This is very impressive writing and I enjoyed reading. The first part of you essay had me convinced that if I ever get back to Massachusetts, I have to go visit this cemetery where I can see all this art and visit the graves of these important people. When I got to end of the essay, I saw your point. Those in the second cemetery may not be famous but their end is the same. Death is the great equalizer I sorry I have not six for this.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
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Thank you Beth. I truly appreciate you review and kind words.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from GeraldShuler
You were wise to stay with your chosen format. You didn't have to compete with other poet's work. You wrote the equal to King Solomon when he said (in prose, by the way) the same thing. Rich or poor, life can only end in death and we will all be forgotten. Great piece of writing.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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You were wise to stay with your chosen format. You didn't have to compete with other poet's work. You wrote the equal to King Solomon when he said (in prose, by the way) the same thing. Rich or poor, life can only end in death and we will all be forgotten. Great piece of writing.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you Gerald, I truly appreciate your kind words. Thank you for the review.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a very interesting and informative story. I have been to the area only on business over the years and never spent any time looking around at the history except for the Kenndy library. I for one am glad you wrote in prose; it is a really good job.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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This is a very interesting and informative story. I have been to the area only on business over the years and never spent any time looking around at the history except for the Kenndy library. I for one am glad you wrote in prose; it is a really good job.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you Terry. I appreciate your review and kind comments.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Great work. We might differ on your very last phrase as for doctrine, but the essay was very well done.
First sentence - are there four cemeteries?
Dry spells are tough. You sometimes to go to Walmart and buy a bag of inspiration.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Great work. We might differ on your very last phrase as for doctrine, but the essay was very well done.
First sentence - are there four cemeteries?
Dry spells are tough. You sometimes to go to Walmart and buy a bag of inspiration.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you Wayne. There are two cemeteries. Sorry for the confusion.
I appreciate your review and very kind comments.
Take care and maybe I will go to Walmart, they have about everything else.
Best regards,
Mary
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As you say, death is an equaliser and the monument means nothing to those who died. The 'posh' cemetery is very nice, but again, like you said, the one on the other side of the road is where people actually go to mourn they loved ones, not look at a fancy stone. I'm not sure I'd like to be married in a cemetery!! This was really interesting, Mary, thanks for sharing it with us. Have a lovely day. Sandra xx
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As you say, death is an equaliser and the monument means nothing to those who died. The 'posh' cemetery is very nice, but again, like you said, the one on the other side of the road is where people actually go to mourn they loved ones, not look at a fancy stone. I'm not sure I'd like to be married in a cemetery!! This was really interesting, Mary, thanks for sharing it with us. Have a lovely day. Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As you say, death is an equaliser and the monument means nothing to those who died. The 'posh' cemetery is very nice, but again, like you said, the one on the other side of the road is where people actually go to mourn they loved ones, not look at a fancy stone. I'm not sure I'd like to be married in a cemetery!! This was really interesting, Mary, thanks for sharing it with us. Have a lovely day. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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As you say, death is an equaliser and the monument means nothing to those who died. The 'posh' cemetery is very nice, but again, like you said, the one on the other side of the road is where people actually go to mourn they loved ones, not look at a fancy stone. I'm not sure I'd like to be married in a cemetery!! This was really interesting, Mary, thanks for sharing it with us. Have a lovely day. Sandra xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you Sandra, I appreciate your review and am glad you found it an interesting story.
Take care and regards,
Mary
