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Sea Of Galilee

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This Sea Played A Major Role In Jesus' Ministry

10 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley McLain
Exceptional
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I very much enjoyed reading your chapter about the sea of Galilee. I learned new information. I will make it a point to read more. Great job. Have a Happy and safe New Year. Shirley

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Informative information indeed and your piece was very interesting and very well written! The presentation was perfect and loved the imagery selected;-)

Thanxxxxx for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Much appreciated review. Thanks.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks again for sharing another fine chapter and all the information you've gathered in your studies. I can hardly wait for chapter five. Thanks for sharing. I hope all is going well. Wishing you the Healthiest and Happiest New Year ever!

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Hope you had a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year. Hopefully done with surguries, at least for now. Three were enough for me.
reply by Ric Myworld on 31-Dec-2021
    The holidays are all about the same for me. I celebrate Christ's birthday in my mind, and then pretty much stick to myself. I'm single and my children are all grown, have lives of their own, and don't live close. I hope you had a Merry Christmas, and I'm sure you're relieved the surgeries are behind you. I'm glad for you. Happy New Year!
Comment from GE Parson
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I give this writinga 6 because of all the detailed research involved, using Biblical references. I'm not sure what point you were making, but you certainly did a good detailed research.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Appreciate the sixer and the review.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Brett, it's a very interesting journey you take us through The Middle East, which consists of all the countries where three main religions originated. Those of Judaism, Muslim, and Christianity. Very interesting indeed. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Appreciate the insightful review.
Comment from Ricky1024
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I liked it, sorta a History Lesson mapped out.
The Details were wonderful.
Especially, sugar Coating it with Religious inserts.
Thanks and have a Blessed New Year.
Rick

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Appreciate the review. Glad you enjoyed this portion.
Comment from royowen
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Thanks for this marvellous walk through an Ancient sea-land route through these biblical lands which were civilised while my ancestors were swinging through metaphoric trees, beautifully written and very informative in its essence, beautifully written Brett, excellent research to be commended, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Appreciate the insightful review.
reply by royowen on 31-Dec-2021
    Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Exceptional
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Thank you for sharing this with us. Our youngest son, Steven and my husband, Brian got into a huge discussion over Thanksgiving while Steven was home over archaeology of this areas. For Christmas Steven gave his dad a book title, 'Under Jerusalem'. They're having a great time searching things and discussing them. Great job.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
    Glad you enjoyed this portion..good to have something they can do like that together.
Comment from Frank Malley
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Mr. West's article has the features a report such as an encyclopedia might include. It enlightened me about the Via Maris, an important historical road with notable and ancient religious and trade significance. One clear absence in Mr. West's writing is description, which would have added a lot to the string of facts we read in this piece. What kinds of places did the Via Maris pass through? What were some of the dominant cultures in place along this road? A detail that grammatical editing should have caught and did not is the faulty final sentence, which is perhaps the worst place to have a faulty sentence.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
    Perhaps you should read the actual words written.

    The answers to all your questions are spelled out.

    Oh yea, a good working knowledge of the English language is also necessary in order to comprehend, that means, understand, what is read.
reply by Frank Malley on 28-Dec-2021
    Well, it's hard not to be thin-skinned when you're a developing writer. Although it's not important, I have a master's degree in English.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Essay is expressed authentic, informative and reasoned, structured and historically educative about towns and cities of Jerusalem and more; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
    Whatever.