A Star Is Born
A short prayer41 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
This is so cute and clever! It would be impossible to read this Naani without a huge smile on one's face. It is such a fun poem and exactly as a Naani should be. Good luck in the contest. (You won't need it,)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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This is so cute and clever! It would be impossible to read this Naani without a huge smile on one's face. It is such a fun poem and exactly as a Naani should be. Good luck in the contest. (You won't need it,)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Adonna. You are too kind.
Comment from amahra
A naani poem? Hm. That's a very interesting poem and you pulled it off it seems. I've never heard of this poem but am sure I'll be reading a lot of them for this contest. Great job.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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A naani poem? Hm. That's a very interesting poem and you pulled it off it seems. I've never heard of this poem but am sure I'll be reading a lot of them for this contest. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Amahra. It was a new one for me, also.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
What a MARVELOUS piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of 'Naani' this is!
Meeting the desired norms; Impressive plus meaningful phraseology; Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme - The poet's Prayer to the Almighty, and the same is granted instantly as well as with an outstanding splendor!
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Hey the shining Star, you certainly deserve to be honored with the SPARKLING Star!
Superb!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Hello Friend,
What a MARVELOUS piece of Spiritual Poetry in the form of 'Naani' this is!
Meeting the desired norms; Impressive plus meaningful phraseology; Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting its theme - The poet's Prayer to the Almighty, and the same is granted instantly as well as with an outstanding splendor!
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Hey the shining Star, you certainly deserve to be honored with the SPARKLING Star!
Superb!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the review. I'm blushing from all the praise and six stars.
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Hi, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your few syllables in your uplifting, deeply spiritual naani. The message is powerful. To me it says God will bless me and enable me to do wonderful things if I truly believe in His love and power.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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You have made excellent use of your few syllables in your uplifting, deeply spiritual naani. The message is powerful. To me it says God will bless me and enable me to do wonderful things if I truly believe in His love and power.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Janice. He will, but choose your words carefully.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This form is new to me, but I explored and your entry seems to fit the requirements well. You wrote something delightful and filled with wonder. I just love it and hope I can learn the form well.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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This form is new to me, but I explored and your entry seems to fit the requirements well. You wrote something delightful and filled with wonder. I just love it and hope I can learn the form well.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Sherry. You will do fine.
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Thank you!
Comment from karenina
I like this form. Always have. So much freedom to create -- simply a syllabic parameter between twenty and twenty-five. There is a wit about your write that leaves me smiling. Like God has a thing for irony! Clever post! Prayers should be more specific! (smile)--
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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I like this form. Always have. So much freedom to create -- simply a syllabic parameter between twenty and twenty-five. There is a wit about your write that leaves me smiling. Like God has a thing for irony! Clever post! Prayers should be more specific! (smile)--
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Karenina. You are right. I will be more specific next time.
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Tee-hee. God loves to make us happy...so maybe if we're clearer, we'll get just what we want!
Karenina
Comment from Terry Broxson
A great entry for this contest, good luck. I think you really hit the nail on the head for the contest, excellent content for so few words. I did have to laugh at the end. Careful sometimes you get what you ask for. Good job.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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A great entry for this contest, good luck. I think you really hit the nail on the head for the contest, excellent content for so few words. I did have to laugh at the end. Careful sometimes you get what you ask for. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Terry. I'll have to choose my words more carefully next time.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very clever play on words and reminds me of the old saw, "Be careful what you wish for." There is something exciting about imagining being way out "there" and having planets spinning around you.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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This is a very clever play on words and reminds me of the old saw, "Be careful what you wish for." There is something exciting about imagining being way out "there" and having planets spinning around you.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Sue. I probably should change that prayer and choose my words more carefully.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme,
and use of dialogue.
-I like your poem very
much because it is creative
and I like the ending very much.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme,
and use of dialogue.
-I like your poem very
much because it is creative
and I like the ending very much.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Pam. I used to be a star gazer.
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You are welcome and thanks for sharing.
Comment from royowen
This is a beautifully written Naani concerning a conversation with God, (which is true if one thinks of prayer, it should be dialogue) so yes, I've never wanted to a literal star, I'd rather be in His image. An excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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This is a beautifully written Naani concerning a conversation with God, (which is true if one thinks of prayer, it should be dialogue) so yes, I've never wanted to a literal star, I'd rather be in His image. An excellent post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Roy. Always look forward to your reviews.
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Most welcome
