Wine, Woman, WOW!
Wine mars men while woman makes them!28 total reviews
Comment from JoannaN
So much things happen in your story, and it is only fifty words. I like the dynamics, and I like the ending. The picture fits well with the rest. I wish you all the best in your contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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So much things happen in your story, and it is only fifty words. I like the dynamics, and I like the ending. The picture fits well with the rest. I wish you all the best in your contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello JoannaN,
What a pleasant surprise this is!
Thank you very much for your so UPLIFTING and LOVELY comments backed by the most coveted SIX STARS!
With best wishes,
~RP
Comment from Julcia
Well written, within the 50 word limit. I enjoyed that the impressive lady cop could
multi task. She can grab a man and also fire in the air. Perhaps I am more of a
feminist than my husband allows me to be. He is sleeping now so hear me
ROAR!
Julcia
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Well written, within the 50 word limit. I enjoyed that the impressive lady cop could
multi task. She can grab a man and also fire in the air. Perhaps I am more of a
feminist than my husband allows me to be. He is sleeping now so hear me
ROAR!
Julcia
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Hello Julcia,
What a pleasant surprise!
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING and so LOVELY words backed by the most coveted SIX STARS.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are welcome.
Julcia
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Very tight flash fiction. I also love the picture associated with the story. It reminds me of the campy batman show I watched growing up on television,
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Very tight flash fiction. I also love the picture associated with the story. It reminds me of the campy batman show I watched growing up on television,
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Theodore McDowell,
What a pleasant surprise! Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING Review. Moreover, my this story could get the 'All Time Best Status' because of you!
With best wishes,
~RP
Comment from MissMerri
Well, RP, you can tell an exciting and startling story in VERY few words. I'm quite impressed. I'm also impressed with a lady cop who is obviously much braver than I and stronger too. I really like your story, for what it is. (It is too short, but of course that's not your decision.) Good luck in this contest. You are an excellent writer. I saw nothing to edit or change. MM
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Well, RP, you can tell an exciting and startling story in VERY few words. I'm quite impressed. I'm also impressed with a lady cop who is obviously much braver than I and stronger too. I really like your story, for what it is. (It is too short, but of course that's not your decision.) Good luck in this contest. You are an excellent writer. I saw nothing to edit or change. MM
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Hello MM,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and MORALE BOOSTING words backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, that would certainly have aroused the "common" folk, a very brave female cop judiciously and boldly raising her cop card, firing her gun, now that would impress, beautifully written RP, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Oh yes indeed, that would certainly have aroused the "common" folk, a very brave female cop judiciously and boldly raising her cop card, firing her gun, now that would impress, beautifully written RP, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello Roy,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck and Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Well done
Comment from l.raven
Hi RP, sorry I'm so late my sweet friend...
this is awesome you...sounds like my kind of woman...
someone who demands respect while out on the town....
she flashed that card...saying...I am somebody...a cop...
now surrender...or wished you had...your charioted is on it's way...as onlookers felt the action...YES!!!...
this is a cool dribble flash fiction story told you...
a true winner...and your picture speaks for itself...
well done sweet guy...best of luck in the contest...
love to you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hi RP, sorry I'm so late my sweet friend...
this is awesome you...sounds like my kind of woman...
someone who demands respect while out on the town....
she flashed that card...saying...I am somebody...a cop...
now surrender...or wished you had...your charioted is on it's way...as onlookers felt the action...YES!!!...
this is a cool dribble flash fiction story told you...
a true winner...and your picture speaks for itself...
well done sweet guy...best of luck in the contest...
love to you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello L. Raven,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by the most coveted SIX STARS plus Best of Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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your soooooo very welcome sweet guy...
always...best wishes back at you...love xxoo
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It's so kind of you, L. Raven.
Have a nice 'long weekend!'
~RP
Comment from CL Huth
As a comic fan, I appreciated this flash fiction! Thank you for bringing the old comic feel while making me smile. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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As a comic fan, I appreciated this flash fiction! Thank you for bringing the old comic feel while making me smile. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello CL Huth,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from jwsteele
Instantaneously, she flashed her Cop Card, grabbed a man, and fired in the air. The police van expeditiously came into action.
It's hard to put anything together with a limit of fifty words. Maybe a poem. This story had a beginning a middle and an end, which makes it complete in my book
Good Job.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Instantaneously, she flashed her Cop Card, grabbed a man, and fired in the air. The police van expeditiously came into action.
It's hard to put anything together with a limit of fifty words. Maybe a poem. This story had a beginning a middle and an end, which makes it complete in my book
Good Job.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello Jwsteele,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. It's hard to tell a story in so few words but you have mastered it. I love the artwork you added to the writing, it couldn't be more perfect. The story is cute and well-written. I wish you only the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Excellent. It's hard to tell a story in so few words but you have mastered it. I love the artwork you added to the writing, it couldn't be more perfect. The story is cute and well-written. I wish you only the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello Prettybluebirds,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by the Best of Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from tfawcus
These louts sure got a surprise! Enough to sober anyone up. The scene you describe comes vividly to mind. I like your humourous cartoon picture to reinforce the point. Good luck in the contest. You've made good use of your allocated fifty words.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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These louts sure got a surprise! Enough to sober anyone up. The scene you describe comes vividly to mind. I like your humourous cartoon picture to reinforce the point. Good luck in the contest. You've made good use of your allocated fifty words.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Hello Tony,
Thank you very much for your so LOVELY and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
