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No Money, No job, No Hope

A FS member Short Poem contest.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This fifteen-word poem, No Money, No Job, No Hope, has the required word count and notes the current situation in America and elsewhere today.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Bill.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Excellent
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Oh Wow, this short work hits the reader with no mercy. This is not a passive read. I am very impressed with your gift of wordsmithing. I found nothing to tweak or adjust. Well Written, Well Done.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for taking the time to give such a positive review. It is most appreciated. Best wishes.
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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Fantastic poem in theme, emotional impact, and the 12 word contest requirement. The only one I have read so far that's eligible. A sure win for you.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
    Thank you so very much for your positive review, Sally. Best wishes.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This General Poetry, Short Poem writing prompt entry speaks no job, no money; no hope, you are entitled, deserving, have earned words for well off people, but not for everyone, well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for your most positive review. It is most appreciated. Best wishes.