The Journey
We all make...5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Mama,
This is a wonderfully metaphoric etheree. It use the mountain climb and its changes for the defeating the challenges of life and the peace you find when you do.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Mama,
This is a wonderfully metaphoric etheree. It use the mountain climb and its changes for the defeating the challenges of life and the peace you find when you do.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
Comment from Annette R.
Good job. I'm impressed you could write poetry in this form and such an interesting take on life. Makes all the sense in the world. I usually prefer a rhyming poem but liked this one for the message. The picture is nice too.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Good job. I'm impressed you could write poetry in this form and such an interesting take on life. Makes all the sense in the world. I usually prefer a rhyming poem but liked this one for the message. The picture is nice too.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging review, Annette! This was the first free-verse style I have tried. I am a rhyming fanatic, too. I appreciate your taking the time to read!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet,
You now have 3 votes.
I enjoyed your description of life .. a path made of ups ( level grounds) and downs ( steep parts) sudden turns ( veers yet up) etc.
I wish you well in the. I test!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Ciao mystery poet,
You now have 3 votes.
I enjoyed your description of life .. a path made of ups ( level grounds) and downs ( steep parts) sudden turns ( veers yet up) etc.
I wish you well in the. I test!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Oh, thanks so much for your vote! This was an interesting poem to create. I appreciate your kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a well-done Etheree poem, and you do an excellent job of sustaining your simile and metaphor from start to finish. I like that there's even a rhyme thrown in for good measure. Your background color goes perfectly with the image you chose. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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This is a well-done Etheree poem, and you do an excellent job of sustaining your simile and metaphor from start to finish. I like that there's even a rhyme thrown in for good measure. Your background color goes perfectly with the image you chose. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much, Michele, for your kind review (and you even noticed my rhyme for good measure :). I appreciate your taking the time to read.
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You're very welcome. FYI, I love rhymes, so I appreciate when people include them even when they don't have to.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. It's an interesting poetic form, I may try it. Good syllables count and connection between lines, as far as I can tell. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. It's an interesting poetic form, I may try it. Good syllables count and connection between lines, as far as I can tell. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear Gypsy. This was my first try at an Etheree; it is fun to try new poetry forms. I appreciate your taking time to respond!
