I Carry Your Heart
Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club9 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a beautiful Choke poem. It's very romantic and you summed it up well for a couple who are deep in love. I need to write one, too. You inspired me.
Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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This is a beautiful Choke poem. It's very romantic and you summed it up well for a couple who are deep in love. I need to write one, too. You inspired me.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I look forward reading your choka poem. They're fun to write.
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I will post it tomorrow.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I like this lovely poem very much. I have never heard of so many different poetry forms as I have since joining FanStory. This poem is so romantic and it is perfect with the picture. Great work.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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I like this lovely poem very much. I have never heard of so many different poetry forms as I have since joining FanStory. This poem is so romantic and it is perfect with the picture. Great work.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
You are my eyes is the part that really resonates!!!
As you may know, I have bad vision I have posted this in my profile notes!!
I love romantic poetry and this one is sure to garner a contest vote!!!
The title the theme and the picture are swell, I have yet to read a better one than this!!
Thank you for this Haiku you know how to do make this work on FS!!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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You are my eyes is the part that really resonates!!!
As you may know, I have bad vision I have posted this in my profile notes!!
I love romantic poetry and this one is sure to garner a contest vote!!!
The title the theme and the picture are swell, I have yet to read a better one than this!!
Thank you for this Haiku you know how to do make this work on FS!!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I love the romance in this short poem. A longing of the soul. Carry his heart. But make sure you don't lose it. So expressive in this modern form of Japanese poetry.Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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I love the romance in this short poem. A longing of the soul. Carry his heart. But make sure you don't lose it. So expressive in this modern form of Japanese poetry.Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Hitcher
If you are going to take on the task of carrying another's heart wherever you go... then you know, without a doubt, you have found THE ONE. The stars aligned at the moment of impact, Cupid's arrow piecing the heart and determining that you will never be apart : ) Nice
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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If you are going to take on the task of carrying another's heart wherever you go... then you know, without a doubt, you have found THE ONE. The stars aligned at the moment of impact, Cupid's arrow piecing the heart and determining that you will never be apart : ) Nice
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Hitch.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, and a nice take on the original; it's like I always say; love is like a suitcase, it goes where you go, unless it's stolen, then it goes somewhere else!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Another fine poem, and a nice take on the original; it's like I always say; love is like a suitcase, it goes where you go, unless it's stolen, then it goes somewhere else!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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LoL you crack me up 🤣
Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Mike.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy Blue
My what a wonderful Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club I Carry Your Heart
With the image and your romatic words are beautifl
Gert
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Gypsy Blue
My what a wonderful Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7 for Japanese Poetry Club I Carry Your Heart
With the image and your romatic words are beautifl
Gert
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Gert.
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You are most welcome Gypsy Blue
Gert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a romantic and passionate write and I loved this presentation. Those old pictures are very sensual and inviting just like your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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This is a romantic and passionate write and I loved this presentation. Those old pictures are very sensual and inviting just like your words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much, Dolly, it's always good to hear from you.
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Comment from lyenochka
What a great love poem! The beloved is always in the heart and mind of the poet and that influences what she does and sees. It's also a great spiritual picture of how we should be with God.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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What a great love poem! The beloved is always in the heart and mind of the poet and that influences what she does and sees. It's also a great spiritual picture of how we should be with God.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you, Helen. I always appreciate your insightful reviews.
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