Wheels Of Life
A personal lamentation- sonnet54 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
I am moved by this poem that marks the years of your life as they speed along. You have reminded us of the ups and the downs that accompany each of us through life. Expressing gratitude is also a significant part of our role as God's children. May God Bless you as you continue to experience His goodness.
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I am moved by this poem that marks the years of your life as they speed along. You have reminded us of the ups and the downs that accompany each of us through life. Expressing gratitude is also a significant part of our role as God's children. May God Bless you as you continue to experience His goodness.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Jaybird,
I so enjoyed reading your sonnet for it is filled with honest reflections of a life lived long and well.
So many experiences you have had during your fruitful life.
Life ends for all of us at some designated time.
But know for a certainty that I am glad your words have touched my life over and over again...
Thank you!
diane
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Hello Jaybird,
I so enjoyed reading your sonnet for it is filled with honest reflections of a life lived long and well.
So many experiences you have had during your fruitful life.
Life ends for all of us at some designated time.
But know for a certainty that I am glad your words have touched my life over and over again...
Thank you!
diane
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A personal lamentation- sonnet
Wheels Of Life
by jaybird1
It's good to know that you want to live more. Aging can be hard but as long as there's life there's hope. Well done.
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A personal lamentation- sonnet
Wheels Of Life
by jaybird1
It's good to know that you want to live more. Aging can be hard but as long as there's life there's hope. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from mermaids
You have written a poem that many can relate to. "The wheels of my life keep daily spinning" is a wonderful line that draws the reader into your words and hold her there. More and more people are living to your age and longer, your poem shows how the mind can keep going and thinking. Excellent poem that touches the reader.
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You have written a poem that many can relate to. "The wheels of my life keep daily spinning" is a wonderful line that draws the reader into your words and hold her there. More and more people are living to your age and longer, your poem shows how the mind can keep going and thinking. Excellent poem that touches the reader.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from jenintorre
Another great poem from you, Jaybird and a joy to read as ever.
Your mind is certainly still sound, no doubt a out that. Thanks for sharing. Love Jen.
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Another great poem from you, Jaybird and a joy to read as ever.
Your mind is certainly still sound, no doubt a out that. Thanks for sharing. Love Jen.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is poetry written by someone who lived a life well spent, and is now writing words of wisdom to those of the same ilk and those who must also travel the long journey of life. The most important line in, "I have served my time and have served it well." We all should strive to be able to utter these same words, so "the powers that be continues to walk with us.
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This is poetry written by someone who lived a life well spent, and is now writing words of wisdom to those of the same ilk and those who must also travel the long journey of life. The most important line in, "I have served my time and have served it well." We all should strive to be able to utter these same words, so "the powers that be continues to walk with us.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from Mary Shifman
Yes, we do. This is a beautiful poem and a message to all of us, I think. I am only just coming into my own now after seventy two years of paddling trying to figure out where I was supposed to go. I have lot I still want to do but "Que Sera, Sera."
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Yes, we do. This is a beautiful poem and a message to all of us, I think. I am only just coming into my own now after seventy two years of paddling trying to figure out where I was supposed to go. I have lot I still want to do but "Que Sera, Sera."
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Wonderful poem about aging. What a blessing that you are at peace about the current "inning" and only ask that God walks this lonely phase of life with you. I'm impressed you are writing all these poems and sonnets even with your eyesight gone!
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Wonderful poem about aging. What a blessing that you are at peace about the current "inning" and only ask that God walks this lonely phase of life with you. I'm impressed you are writing all these poems and sonnets even with your eyesight gone!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from zanya
Oh this is a beautiful poem filled with sincere gratitude for a fulfilled life with an earnest desire to continue along this road of life - wishing you many more years of joyful living. Superb title.
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Oh this is a beautiful poem filled with sincere gratitude for a fulfilled life with an earnest desire to continue along this road of life - wishing you many more years of joyful living. Superb title.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
Comment from godlucifer
only time will tell. only fate can tell time. beyond our dreams,beyond our life,we live to tell the tales of truth. our truth is our present,our truth is our ending,and beyond life is another tale of our story life.
truly
godlucifer
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only time will tell. only fate can tell time. beyond our dreams,beyond our life,we live to tell the tales of truth. our truth is our present,our truth is our ending,and beyond life is another tale of our story life.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
