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A 5-7-5-7-7 poem

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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by Mark Schardine

I can relate to your tanka. I like the way you tell a full story in a few words what's not said speaks volumes.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Mark,
Sometimes the words just won't come to us, the pain is too great to be able to get past. You've expressed yourself well in this poem. I hope it's not as a result of personal experience. Well done.
Blessings.
Tom

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your review and kind words.

    It is a completely fictional story.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Sometimes there are just no words to be found for a situation, but the ache continues in the heart. Your poem conveys this beautifully. Sorry for your pain and sorrow. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
    Thank you for your review and kind words.

    It is a completely fictional story.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 22-Oct-2021
    It's very believable -- good writing!