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A 5-7-5-7-7 poem
2 total reviews
Comment from
L. Kalere
What an intriguing poem. Fill in the blanks and it's almost an entire story.
Very nicely written, but it's leaving me wanting more... which is actually a good thing. It definitely pulled me in. Romance or crime??
Linda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
Thank you for your review and kind words.
I try to create story in only five lines.
Comment from
LisaMay
I like the romantic mystery of your poem, leaving me to wonder about these two people and the future of their relationship. The allure of far off places can often lead to romance. I also wonder why the quick departure? What happened? Was she running away from him and he has gone after her? Or is she on vacation and has made a new conquest? Nice to know the hotel staff are discreet. It seems to indicate an illicit relationship.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
Thank you for your review and insightful words.
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