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Sight Unseen

What you see, is not always what you get.

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Cinquain: 2-4-6-8-2 syllable count.

PERFECT!

Many ways to interpret this poem, which intrigues me.

Many have vision/sight are blind to what is around them.

Seeing does take an investment!

Great image for this conquain!

(This form also looks great center aligned qq try it on your next one, just for comparison!)

I see you've focused mainly on the contests...

That can be fun...

How about letting us in to your own style now?

Are you reviewing much? It's the best way to earn member dollars...and pick up a fan or two along
the way!

I enjoyed reading your posts thus far...

Karenina



 Comment Written 14-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Someone gave me some great advice recently, & as much as I?d like to break down your review piece by piece and express to you how grateful I am for each and every kind, & helpful instance within it, I?ll just simply say, Thnxx So Much! (Even in taking a strangers kind advice, leave it to me to have still somehow managed to say way too much!)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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You have a very interesting Cinquain here (2-4-6-8-2). I enjoyed the alliteration of the s's. I believe your poem to be a clever expression of your title 'sight unseen'. 'Seeing is sold separately' ... that is good!
Very best wishes in the contest!



 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank You So Very Much! I appreciate you taking the time to help!
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 21-Oct-2021
    You are so very welcome!
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Sight Unseen"
This Cinquain Poetry Contest Entry.
Is rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while, Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
    Thank You So Very Much! The descriptions in your interpretation are so "in the thick of it"?They really got me thinking & were truly interesting! I am so grateful for your time and input! Thnxx So Much! XD
reply by Ricky1024 on 21-Oct-2021