Confronting Terror
A monster hunter meets his greatest opponent.3 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an interesting story and left me with numerous questions and a desire for more of the tale. I hope there are more posts about this warrior and his consort. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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This is an interesting story and left me with numerous questions and a desire for more of the tale. I hope there are more posts about this warrior and his consort. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2021
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Thank you. There will be. Talon and Annyla come from my D&D days in college and this story is a spinoff of a story I wrote in 2002, The Knockl, which can be found in my published supernatural/horror anthology Lil's Spirit's: This Side of the Veil.
The book with it's five stories plus a novella, is available on Amazon, here: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B08RWHRYBL.
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I will keep an eye open for more posts and check out your book.
Comment from writer723
I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good continuity in this story. Suspense builds throughout and culminates in the battle. Good guy wins. I needed just a bit more about the relationship between Talon and Annyla .
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Good continuity in this story. Suspense builds throughout and culminates in the battle. Good guy wins. I needed just a bit more about the relationship between Talon and Annyla .
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021
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Thank you. Unfortunately that's the problem when working within the confines of 500 words. There will be more. This is just for the contest entry.
