Raise the Anchor
3-5-3 Air contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Raise the Anchor, has the proper formatting and uses a great metaphor of inspirational wind to billow the sails of creativity. Nice.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
This 3-5-3, Raise the Anchor, has the proper formatting and uses a great metaphor of inspirational wind to billow the sails of creativity. Nice.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Bill. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Mama Baer
Love this beautiful, fun poem. That was so creative to combine the theme of air with our muse. You hit the nail right on the head! I love that feeling when my muse fills my sails. Yours certainly did with this poem!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
Love this beautiful, fun poem. That was so creative to combine the theme of air with our muse. You hit the nail right on the head! I love that feeling when my muse fills my sails. Yours certainly did with this poem!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Wow. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Mama B. Yes, I love it when the sails get filled. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and kind comments. I'm glad you liked my little piece. I hope you have yourself a great day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I see . She farted and you hated her for that. I'm on her side because she is a woman CEO. It is rare and hard for women to be in that position.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
I see . She farted and you hated her for that. I'm on her side because she is a woman CEO. It is rare and hard for women to be in that position.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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He didn't actually hate her, just her fart. Lol. Thank you for the review and stars, Lisa.
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a good one. Great job on a difficult prompt. Are you working in the mail room now?
The next time that you hear a fart,
To keep your silence would be smart.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
That's a good one. Great job on a difficult prompt. Are you working in the mail room now?
The next time that you hear a fart,
To keep your silence would be smart.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Lol. Thank you for the great review, Paul. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.