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A Horror Contest Love Poem.3 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
She is a fascinating creature and one worthy of the title The Queen of Darkness and Despair. I have had a lot of fun bringing her to life in my own dark poetry scribblings. Good luck with this one AND nice choice... Lilith : ))
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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She is a fascinating creature and one worthy of the title The Queen of Darkness and Despair. I have had a lot of fun bringing her to life in my own dark poetry scribblings. Good luck with this one AND nice choice... Lilith : ))
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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I dream of Lilith.
If I was going to be tortured and lose my soul I couldn't think of any better supernatural being?
And thanks for hitching a ride!
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Comment from writer723
I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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I very much enjoyed reading your excellent story. It really drew me in and captured my attention from start to finish. I found myself rooting for the main character all the way and wishing the best for the individual. Your depiction of this situation was quite emotional and touching to me. Your descriptive skills are exceptional and you express yourself very well.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2021
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Everybody here has their niche and mine is storytelling.
Thank you very much for your time and review.
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Comment from Bill Schott
Hi, Ricky. Your style is unmistakable. This poem is inserted in a horror story contest so I wouldn't expect a win once the monitors see it is not actually a story. However, now that I've read it, I would say it's a effective dialogue story.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Hi, Ricky. Your style is unmistakable. This poem is inserted in a horror story contest so I wouldn't expect a win once the monitors see it is not actually a story. However, now that I've read it, I would say it's a effective dialogue story.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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I thank you very much for stopping by checking out my entry I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
I don't normally enter the contest so I get pleasure from posting and getting the reviews.
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