Cozy Night
A cozy night at home.5 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
This sounds very much like the kind of evening I enjoy on a cold, winter's night. You paint a picture with your well-chosen words that is vivid and comforting. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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This sounds very much like the kind of evening I enjoy on a cold, winter's night. You paint a picture with your well-chosen words that is vivid and comforting. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2021
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Thank you for talking the time to review my work!
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Coffee in my cup
Raindrops against my window
Blanket and a book"
Sounds like the perfect way to spend the evening. Great entry for the contest, although I might change tea for coffee.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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"Coffee in my cup
Raindrops against my window
Blanket and a book"
Sounds like the perfect way to spend the evening. Great entry for the contest, although I might change tea for coffee.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your review. You are not the first person to say that about the tea!
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You are welcome. I drink coffee in the morning and tea at night.
Comment from patcelaw
In my cup would be tea, as I do not like coffee. I do enjoy seeing raindrops on my windows and love the nights when it is cooler and I can use a blanket to keep me warm.
Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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In my cup would be tea, as I do not like coffee. I do enjoy seeing raindrops on my windows and love the nights when it is cooler and I can use a blanket to keep me warm.
Patricia
Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the six star review! I enjoy those nights too!
Comment from Partha Banerjee
Nicely written. However, the first line was a bit flat. The next two lines bring out beautiful imagery. Of course, it's your poem and you have the ultimate ownership of it. Coffee in my cup -- maybe you could write Coffee [an adjective or verb] in my cup [or get rid of in my cup altogether]? Just an idea.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Nicely written. However, the first line was a bit flat. The next two lines bring out beautiful imagery. Of course, it's your poem and you have the ultimate ownership of it. Coffee in my cup -- maybe you could write Coffee [an adjective or verb] in my cup [or get rid of in my cup altogether]? Just an idea.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your very honest review. I am new at writing this type of poem and I appreciate the constructive criticism to help me grow.
Comment from T B Botts
Ahh yes! I can picture it all in my mind. What can be more comforting than sitting under a blanket with a hot cup of coffee on a dark and stormy night with a good book to read? There aren't too many things much better. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Ahh yes! I can picture it all in my mind. What can be more comforting than sitting under a blanket with a hot cup of coffee on a dark and stormy night with a good book to read? There aren't too many things much better. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 07-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2021
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Thank you Tom. I am glad that you got my vibe in this poem. It was my first attempt at a Haiku poem. Hopefully I will improve with time.
